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Discussion in 'Web Design' started by Cobra_Commander, Sep 1, 2011.

  1. Cobra_Commander

    Cobra_Commander Newbie

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    Looking for feedback....

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  2. Seo Lover

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    Not bad . Is that your first design ?
     
  3. adamiove

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    Looking good. I like it's clean Work more on the banner, that shadow doesn't go with the reflection. Make a blurry shadow just below. And maybe fade out the reflection. Hope you understand
     
  4. Cobra_Commander

    Cobra_Commander Newbie

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    Ok, how does it look now?

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    Look good for your first design :)
     
  6. davids355

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    Pretty solid design to be honest. Finding it hard to make criticism:)

    Possibly I might put the thin column on the right, but if your Peking mainly on CTR leave it as it is and stick ad top left, will probably do well.

    Also maybe you could introduce a bit more colour?? But really it's pretty tight.
     
  7. kingcron

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    I like the layout and the design. I might have chosen a different guy and see if you can toy around with the tattoo to make it blend better. looks shopped on to that guy's arm. Otherwise its a great looking page.
     
  8. remac22

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    Yeah it's a nice design for sure. The shadow below the text is a bit crazy as you probably don't need quite so long of a header (your space above the fold is important for grabbing the reader's attention!) but it looks pretty nice overall, good job.
     
  9. elitemarketer

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    At first, I wasn't impressed with just the image, but once you used Artisteer on it and turned it into a real website, I thought it looked really nice.
     
  10. adamiove

    adamiove Junior Member

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    I would do something like this on the title, if you really want to go on shadow/reflectiom. And remove the Glow!
     

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    Very neat and clean design. Looking very professional. I think no change required.
     
  12. Cobra_Commander

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    Thanks for all the input folks! it's greatly appreciated.