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Opinions needed about two articles

Discussion in 'Associated Content & Writing Articles' started by Dilettante, Feb 21, 2015.

  1. Dilettante

    Dilettante Power Member

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    Hello,

    I ordered two articles on freelance platform and I would like to have your opinions about this article. English isn't my mother tongue, so I can't know if it's well written or no. It's about sushi.




    Thanks for your opinions.

    P.S. : you can use, rewrite or take this article. I bought it to see if the writer is worth something. I don't plan to use it.
     
  2. IAmFromTheInternet

    IAmFromTheInternet Junior Member

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    English is not my first language either, but by reading through this article I noticed like 6 or 7 mistakes already. Bad sentences, some of them don't even make sense.

    Looks like a Google Translate or badly spun article.

    If you want quality, don't even think about hiring this writer.
     
    Last edited: Feb 21, 2015
  3. rosario1990

    rosario1990 Registered Member

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    I read your article and even this don't make my sense at all. I think it has done by google spinner or by a bad boot.
     
  4. webonic

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    Nice and well organized article. This article writter is good for my. How much did he charge for this article
     
  5. Trepanated

    Trepanated Supreme Member

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    It's terrible.

    It makes no sense and is clearly spun - badly spun too.
     
  6. Hawkster

    Hawkster Jr. VIP Jr. VIP

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    What Trepanated said. I wouldn't be happy with that. How much did it cost you?
     
  7. cobaltblue87

    cobaltblue87 Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    From the very first two or three sentences, it should like you've gotten a non-native writer. Some of the wording is off. How much did you pay for it? Depending on price, you may have gotten what you paid for.
     
  8. Dilettante

    Dilettante Power Member

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    "It makes no sense and is clearly spun - badly spun too."

    That's what I thought, but I wasn't sure.

    Thanks.

    (And no, I won't say where I bought this article: don't want to promote the "writer", even if it was cheap).

    edit: I thought of one thing: could this article be used as an article for Google crawlers ? An article which isn't read by humans, but by bots ?

    What do you think ?
     
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  9. t3choo

    t3choo Registered Member

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    How much the person charged you for this article. I write way better articles for very cheap price. You can check marketplace if you want quality articles
     
  10. demonicsheikh

    demonicsheikh Registered Member

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    The introduction is poor.
    The article's topic is unclear.
    At one time he is talking about the cooking and other the ingredients.
    The article is written by a non-mature writer.
    The keywords are not good enough and not repeated like Google expects.

    A good intro would be like this

    "Sushi is a type of food that is not only popular in Japan but also is enjoyed around the world as an exquisite food. With many ways to cook and prepare a person can get confused with the variety of ingredients and preparation method............................................................................"

    That is how to write an intro.;)
     
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  11. SEOking222

    SEOking222 Jr. VIP Jr. VIP

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    Bad article! How much you paid to have it done?