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  1. boskaosbola

    boskaosbola Newbie

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    I have just ordered from 3 different content writer, Because my English is bad, I need your help. Is this paper good enough for my money sites?
    Please give the advantages and disadvantages of each article.

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    Adorable Shih Tzu Maltese Mix to be Your New BFF

    Everybody will agree upon how cute Shih Tzu Maltese mix is. Do you familiar with this kind of dog? Perhaps you know it from its other name, Malti Zu, Mal-Shi, or Malt-Tzu. From it name, you may have known that this Malt-Tzu is hybrid type. The owner gets this cute dog from Shih Tzu and Maltese breeding. Imagine how the result from those two cutest dogs is! Just like the one you often see at happy family pet advertising! Of course every house should have this cute Shih Tzu Maltese mix puppies to make the house seems more cheery.

    Before deciding to adopt a Shih Tzu Maltese mix, you should know its characteristics first. As already mentioned on the first paragraph, it is not an original dog race. Its parents are Shih Tzu and Maltese dogs. However, not every dog comes from pure Maltese-Shih Tzu parents. Some of them come from second or third generations. You should ask the seller what generations the Shih Tzu Maltese mix for sale is, whether first, twice, or more. The seller could breed from multi generations as well, so it is a cross generation breeds.

    How about the characteristics of Shih Tzu Maltese poodle mix? Just like another mix race dog, the characteristics are highly affected from its parents. It could be more like its mother, or like its father, or mix from both of them. Certainly, you need to know the characteristic of either Shih Tzu or Maltese dog. Let’s start from Shih Tzu dog. Usually, people called this dog as toy dog too because of its funny appearance. The name also represents its natural hobby to play and go out.
    The Shih Tzu dog is really good companion for everybody. It is not mean to be hunter or house keeper, but to play with you or your children. It will gladly follow you everywhere at your house with its mini legs. This dog is really friendly even for strangers who they never knew before. So, this small dog will not attack your guests on their first visitation at your home. And if your guests bring their own pet, it will act nicely and friendly as well!

    Different from the Shih Tzu dog, the Maltese dog is less friendly towards strangers. However, it will not cause any harms to your guests. Once it knows a familiar figure, the dog will not hesitate to embrace that person. This dog looks more gallant than the Shih Tzu dog. Its fearless nature makes them very good at guarding your house. So, the dog could be served not only for toy but also as security team at your house. You could specially train this Maltese dog and let it join dog competition. Certainly, this activity will bond the relationship between you two.

    For some cases, some Shih Tzu Maltese mix puppies for sale will have combination traits from their parents. For example, you may read about Willow, a 7 months puppy. It has friendly nature like a Shih Tzu with brave element from Maltese. Certainly, you could get your own Shih Tzu Maltese mix which suitable with your needs.



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    What to Know about Maltese x Shih Tzu Puppies

    Today, designer breed is more and more popular. It is a method of crossing 2 different types of dog so that a new dog type comes. There are many cases that happen related to this experiment. One of the most interesting designer dogs is Maltese x Shih Tzu puppies. Either Maltese or Shih Tzu is a kind of dog that has cute look and funny personalities. So, if you mix them, a cuter and funnier kind of dog comes. Some people also call it as Malshi puppies. Anyway, it will be very interesting to discuss more about it.

    Size and Weight of Maltese x Shih Tzu Puppies

    Firstly, let’s talk about Maltese Shih Tzu puppies’ size and weight. The size is different from one to another. Commonly, it is affected by the parents mixed. However, based on some researches, the average of size is about 10 inches of the height. With this height, this cross breed can weigh from about 6 up to 12 pounds. Considering the size and weight, we can say that it also belongs to small or toy dog.

    The Personalities of Maltase x Shih Tzu Puppies

    It is important to know its personality. Which personality is more dominant? For your information, this designer dog is intelligent. So, it can adapt to the environment fast and easily. Commonly, this dog is active as well as outgoing. It can be intimate with you and your family. The most important thing for this cross breed is family whether it is the real family which means parents or you as the owner because you he considers you as his family, too. Anyway, the temperament is affected by various factors such as the socialization, training, heredity, etc.

    How to Care for Maltese x Shih Tzu Puppies

    If you love your Maltese Shih Tzu cross breed, you have to care for it as well as possible. There are some tips that you can follow in relation to the cares. Firstly, you need to train it some exercises. Just ask him to play for a while like walking, rolling, jumping, etc. You can train it either indoor or outdoor. Besides that, also need to pay attention to grooming care. You may need to brush it 3 times a week for least. Then, to control the health, you should meet a vet to check the health condition.

    How to Feed Maltese x Shih Tzu Puppies

    Petting Maltese Shih Tzu puppies requires us to pet them regularly. The foods given should be really healthy so that this Malshi will always be healthy. Feeding this dog should also pay attention to the portion because too much and too little will be not good. Ideally, the amount of foods for Malshi should be around a quarter up to a half cup. However, it should be given in the morning and afternoon. We cannot give it for one time only.



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    Best Used Living Room Furniture Sale for Traditional Home

    Used living room furniture sale could be the long-term investment and the quality of furniture is important from fabric to framework. The durability of frame and the type materials are the prior that you should consider. With the furniture pieces, it will get lot of wear and tear. To make sure that your traditional furniture could long last as used furniture, here are our best ideas that you could try before purchasing used living room furniture sale.

    Choose based on your needs

    Used living room furniture sale is recommended for you especially when you choose living room furniture or sofa set fabric based on your needs. Leather sofas are most durable and it is the most expensive. It is the ideal solution if you live with kids and pets since it is very easy to clean and it is not stain. About the alternative idea for used living room furniture sale, it is completed with microfiber and leather that should be suede-like material composed with tiny fibers of polyester woven and superb durability material.

    Measure the framework of living room set

    In order to deal with traditional furniture for living room, it is suggested for you to choose hardwoods that work best in order to stand up with lot of weight so it does not crack very easily. Make sure that you also ask the kiln-dried wood. With kiln-drying, it could help you o remove all moisture of wood for used living room furniture sale and it prevents from cracking easily. The strongest option is maple and oak. One thing that you should note is the particle woods should be avoided because it is not durable for heavy use for used living room furniture sale.

    Choosing the furniture and materials

    Used living room furniture sale would be durable if you choose furniture that have been glued, doweled or screwed. It would not last long if you choose furniture that is simply stapled. Framed furniture with maple or oak is commonly will not be stapled. The positive feature of durable frame could be seen with the corner blocks. It is recommended to shop only made of wood such as wood tables and the accessories but it is okay as long as you use it for accessory pieces that will not deal with heavy weight that is from the users. This way will help you a lot to find out durability trough used living room furniture sale.
     
  2. Phenomix

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    Not good enough mate.

    I hope none of those writers claimed their content was written by natives.
     
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    I hope you have not paid them yet. There seem to be lots of errors in terms of readability, and also basic grammar seems to be missing. For instance in the first article that you have posted if you notice instead of " are you familiar with this kind of dog?" the sentence reads "Do you familiar with this kind of dog?", which is completely wrong. I hope you can get it sorted.
     
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    agree with all the remars above

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    very long sentences

    sucks to read, hard to keep up with the idea behind the sentence/paragraph
     
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    I only read the first paragraph of each and they are all pretty bad.
     
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    Are these from the same writer? The first artcile seems to be a bit better than the rest but nonetheless all need work to be published on your money site.
     
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    For the remaining two, he got bored and started punching keys on the keybord without a clear intent.
     
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    try to find writer from this forum
     
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