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Discussion in 'Copywriting & Sales Persuasion' started by webhostingman, Aug 10, 2017.

  1. webhostingman

    webhostingman Junior Member

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    It was pretty nice and if it passed premium copyscape then keep him / her.

    Always respect people by paying well, so they won't decrease quality in the near future and keep them motivated, make them enjoy working for you.
     
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  3. SEO

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    Eh, it's OK. Lots of word padding. It says very little with a lot of words. I'd probably pay $1-$1.50 per hundred words. When I think "digital marketing", artificial intelligence isn't the first thing that comes to my mind. Also, the "digital marketing in 2017" is a bit heavy-handed and doesn't feel natural at all. I'm not sure what instruction was given, but perhaps that might have also messed the writer up. I wouldn't use it on my money site, but I'd use it as a tier 1.
     
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  4. webhostingman

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    Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it.

    Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it. Point taken.

    Also anyone else want to chime in? :) I would love to read a different angle to it.
     
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    $5 at most and i wouldn't use it on my money site. Its an OK article
     
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    You will regret this article in 2018
     
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  7. SEO

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    It's a scientific fact that 2017 based keywords will be less competitive in 2018. Deal with it.

    I'm killing it on "Google PEG ratio June 2004"

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    Yeah, not money site worthy IMHO.
     
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    It's like you have keyword stuffed digital marketing in 2017 man...find someone else on this forum!

    Your intention is to rank for just 2017 or what?
     
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  10. webhostingman

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    Thanks guys. If anyone wants to chime in is welcome to do so. :)
     
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    Seems very stiff.

    Did you hire a PROFESSOR to write it?

    If you are promoting digital marketing services you have to adopt the RIGHT TONE and VOICE

    Think Neil Patel or Larry Kim NOT Michel Foucault or Jacques Derrida