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Discussion in 'Web Design' started by xFBxx, Jun 25, 2012.

  1. xFBxx

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    Hello,

    I have recently designed a website & i am about to launch and spend alot of money marketing it. I need your help to tell me what's good/bad and what improvements could be made.

    I have shared many free give-aways and helped many people, please help me back.

    http://buytwitterfollow.com/

    Thanks & Much appreciated.
     
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  2. Em][n3m

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    looks good :) , but try to resize page width a bit , because bar where you navigate left and right doesnt look too good :p
     
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  3. Duffers5000

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    Nice looking site...I'm not wild about the pink but thats just my preference..I would prefer blues and yellows. ...Where it says "why buy Twitter followers" I would be putting in a stronger sales pitch rather than an outline of what Twitter is about.. Check and re-check your text for Typos...I found 4 just speed reading it...nothing major but if you want to look pro then it has to be 100% clean of typos...hope you dont think I'm being critical , like I said site looks good.
     
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  4. lpe39

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    I will fix it. Thanks

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  5. CML-Mike

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    Looks great, try to resize the width as stated above.
    One more thing, try to use a smoother font. Especially on the "What Type Of Followers Will I Get?" text, you need to do something to that. Check out other sites and see how they make their fonts work for them.

    Other than that, everything else looks great. Best of luck with
     
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  6. PhineasPhreak

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    You should try and test your website on different resolutions as it is quite obvious you have optimised for a visitor with a wide screen monitor. Enter browsershots into the big G.
    Your website design and the graphics on it are superb and have a soft look about them that does encourage me to buy.
    Try going for font type consistency as well because when I scroll down the fonts constantly change and the professional look of your website is affected.

    Just my two cents.
     
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  7. hawgbert

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    In addition to the above comments, maybe stick with one or two different fonts to avoid a "patchwork" feel. A couple of typos, but the design and layout is appealing. You may also want to explain a little more on why you require the account password, since that will be the dealbreaker for most potential clients.
     
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    Nice looking overall.

    But you should really resize the width, and remove the unnecessary whitespace on the side. Let the content centers automatically instead of having a bar to navigate left and right.

    I think you should make the text a little bigger, it looks really tiny and hard to read. At least I didn't feel like reading it (so I can't tell about typos :p )
    Also you should refine the typography and visual hierarchy in the bottom half of the page, the text looks like all over the place.

    Lastly, this is something your user won't see but as a webdesigner, you should start coding like in 2012, not 2000. Consider switching to tableless design (only use tables when absolutely necessary to draw a table, not your whole layout - see W3C recommandations) and put your css in separate spreadsheet instead of having it all over the place in your markup. ;)
     
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  9. Carlosse

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    the width is fine on my laptop.

    - I would change the packages, most popular never the cheapest one...and the one with the bigger number is the shortest...get this a thought.

    - Need help row - OK, maybe at the bottom and maybe with a direct contact form, email and subject...

    - Also, after the email row, the 3 circles are a bit confused although they look great

    - I like when i see text on the homepage! xD

    Great work btw!!
     
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  10. NojWang

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    It's never easy to put yourself out there to be ripped in a forum setting so +1 for that.
    The design overall I like very much but I do think there are some issues/improvements that should be instituted to put it over the top.

    From top to bottom:
    - Why are you not using the actual twitter logo/follow me icon? Legal Issues?
    - BuyTwitterFollowcom text should use the same or similar font as twitter (Tommorow People on dafont)
    - Not sure of the thought process behind the pink but... definitely replace it with twitter blue #41ABE1
    - Like the "as featured on" section gives you some social proof but why no links?
    - Not sure about the customer support section (email should point to contact page not mailto)
    - As mentioned by Carlosee circles look good but not sure why they are there, and imho that area should have some key benefits to having more followers before the fold. Maybe the "Why Buy Twitter Followers" section.
    - As mentioned by Zak_A what's up with the tables? Hire someone and convert to wordpress pronto.
    - Still a few typos here and there, the content really needs a proof reading by a native english speaker or english snob ;-)
    - When I choose to buy followers why does the following page say "Try it now" ... would "Buy Now" not be more accurate?
    - Lastly why does the price on plimus not match the price on your site? $14.95 vs $16.39 that was a bit of a red flag.

    I think you are really close from taking this from a 7/10 to 9+. Best of luck!
     
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    Thanks everyone - Thanks is given! I am working on it now!
     
  12. dbyrn

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    It's not bad IMHO.
    The pink is killing me. Unless you're really into it try something else, please!
    What are these three big circles with pictures inside? I don't get it and moreover there's something wrong with these pictures - are you trying to get it 3D or it's just a bad photo of a CRT screen?
    Try to make the "why buy twitter followers" section more attractive. At least make the text bigger, give some titles, bolds etc. If you want to make it shine compose a short picture story about "why get twitter followers".
    At the bottom of the page I can see two "f" signs hoovering over the footer - looks like a bug.

    Good luck,
    D.
     
  13. techcrunked

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    it's nice, but get rid of the circles, they are distracting. instead, add some psychological triggers and more call to actions, especially if you are gonna use ppc
     
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    My Current Web Designer is not responding, so i am looking for a new designer to implement these changes people have said.
     
  15. jazzc

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    Try in the "Hire a Freelancer" section
     
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    Looks pretty good. I would try to make the top right navigation links more appealing.
     
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    I have to say the pink packages are kind of throwing me off. I can't look at them for too long before wanting to leave the site. I think you want them to be more appealing, but that's just imo.

    Also, I don't think the 3 circles below the packages match the rest of the site. They just seem out of place and confused as to what they're showcasing.

    Overall great work on the site though!