Need some feedback for the design

Jothi Web · Jul 27, 2021

Hello,

Its Jothi.. I know many of authority people available in this forum. I would like to get some feedback from you all for the following designes. It will be helpful for more improvement and all.

I hope you understand.

Thanks.

Note: My itentions is not to sell. Just for feedback.

Visiting Card Design:

Brochure Design:

FWA · Jul 27, 2021

very good desighn , i like it

Gogol · Jul 27, 2021

I like the second one. I don't like how the pink line diverges in the first design, instead of completing the curve (if that makes sense). I like the colors in both the designs.

Deleted member 658642 · Jul 27, 2021

I’m no graphic designer but the colors seem too sharp and not blended in enough. The 2021 on the second pic stands out like a sore thumb.

Black Adam · Jul 27, 2021

I like designs. My suggestion is change colors, add different font styles. Good luck.

Gogol · Jul 27, 2021

RushingWind said:
I’m no graphic designer but the colors seem too sharp and not blended in enough. The 2021 on the second pic stands out like a sore thumb.

Black Adam said:
I like designs. My suggestion is change colors, add different font styles. Good luck.

As for the color scheme, it's not that bad is it? Specially the Brochure. These kind of schemes are heavily used in print medium (like newspapers for example), atleast where I live.

Akashakb · Jul 27, 2021

I'm not a graphics designer guy. But I think you make mistakes choosing colors for the business card. Try to change the color and use a good font. The brochure looks good but not so attractive.

Jothi Web · Jul 28, 2021

FWA said:
very good desighn , i like it

Gogol said:
I like the second one. I don't like how the pink line diverges in the first design, instead of completing the curve (if that makes sense). I like the colors in both the designs.

RushingWind said:
I’m no graphic designer but the colors seem too sharp and not blended in enough. The 2021 on the second pic stands out like a sore thumb.

Black Adam said:
I like designs. My suggestion is change colors, add different font styles. Good luck.

Gogol said:
As for the color scheme, it's not that bad is it? Specially the Brochure. These kind of schemes are heavily used in print medium (like newspapers for example), atleast where I live.

Akashakb said:
I'm not a graphics designer guy. But I think you make mistakes choosing colors for the business card. Try to change the color and use a good font. The brochure looks good but not so attractive.

Thank you all for your feedbacks.

Actually the original color of the brochure didnt reflect when I uploaded here.

I understand very well that some poeple like the color and some dont.

If we use light color for printing, it wont give exact result. Thats why using this range.

But your feedbacks are helpful when it comes to use the graphics design for digital form like infographics, facebook cover images and etc.

Really thanks.

Expecting more feedbacks from others.

sircrocodile · Jul 28, 2021

Jothi Web said:
Hello,

Its Jothi.. I know many of authority people available in this forum. I would like to get some feedback from you all for the following designes. It will be helpful for more improvement and all.

I hope you understand.

Thanks.

Note: My itentions is not to sell. Just for feedback.

Visiting Card Design:

View attachment 180316

Brochure Design:

Look great! You could change the colours man but other than that it looks good.

Jothi Web · Jul 28, 2021

Here is my another design.

Give me the feedback please.

akki1212 · Jul 28, 2021

Hey, in the first one, try using a darker shade of grey. This one makes the card seem very dull. The new design you uploaded with the green shades looks a lot more modern, although I think there's too much white space (the green might go great with black). See what you can do about that. Also, the font is too generic. There are a lot of smarter, yet minimal fonts that you can use.

HunterLife · Jul 28, 2021

Jothi Web said:
Hello,

Its Jothi.. I know many of authority people available in this forum. I would like to get some feedback from you all for the following designes. It will be helpful for more improvement and all.

I hope you understand.

Thanks.

Note: My itentions is not to sell. Just for feedback.

Visiting Card Design:

View attachment 180316

Brochure Design:

The Both are Brilliant and I would say the Second one are the One i Like alot

Rankster · Jul 28, 2021

That design doesn't have original logo. Its a temp logo

mrwootyeet · Jul 28, 2021

1st: design overall looks great, not a fan of the way the pink line is curving. could be a bit more "organic"

2nd: overall all the elements are fine, but the curves of the blob in upper left bother me a bit. again, could be a bit more "organic"

MichaelWhelan · Jul 28, 2021

Nice One.

Albertlowes22 · Jul 28, 2021

I Love both

Jothi Web · Jul 28, 2021

akki1212 said:
Hey, in the first one, try using a darker shade of grey. This one makes the card seem very dull. The new design you uploaded with the green shades looks a lot more modern, although I think there's too much white space (the green might go great with black). See what you can do about that. Also, the font is too generic. There are a lot of smarter, yet minimal fonts that you can use.

Thanks for your feedback.
If I reduce the font size, it will be too smal in printed card. Thats why.

HunterLife said:
The Both are Brilliant and I would say the Second one are the One i Like alot

Rankster said:
That design doesn't have original logo. Its a temp logo

Yes. I use dummy logo.

mrwootyeet said:
1st: design overall looks great, not a fan of the way the pink line is curving. could be a bit more "organic"

2nd: overall all the elements are fine, but the curves of the blob in upper left bother me a bit. again, could be a bit more "organic"

Alright.

MichaelWhelan said:
Nice One.

Gogol · Jul 28, 2021

Jothi Web said:
Here is my another design.

Give me the feedback please.

View attachment 180431

This one looks much better. Lovely colors (but colors are subjective haha). My only criticism would be the font size of the information like email and websites. The size could be a little bigger. Otherwise, good job.

alkeides · Jul 28, 2021

Jothi Web said:
Here is my another design.

Give me the feedback please.

View attachment 180431

This one looks alright, I personally feel that it's a bit like too many things are going on, but I think it looks fine for a plumber or something.

sircrocodile · Jul 28, 2021

Jothi Web said:
Here is my another design.

Give me the feedback please.

View attachment 180431

Its look good but i would suggest adding a little bit more details like a different backround or something likes this. You get me? Regards

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