Need Opinion -- I Write Rap Song

• yo......
• Dmitri in house......
• House is down tonight.....
• This it......
• Dmitri here now.....
• Coming at you.....

• Have friend ever hate or feel bad about friend
• when friend lend money that tend to end friendship with friend?
• I been there.
• I been protest against on unicycle like bear.
• Picking signs for crazy rhymes
• Look at time!
• Sickle in mind like the people who question moi rhyme.
• All commotion about money is funny
• Like bunny is dummy licking up all my honey
• Not take no one from nothing giving hellfire while breathe
• Heave 3 ton of firewood but it best to believe
• That Dmitri has sour taste in mouth
• In South Russia where it bout to go down
• See friends no trigger me
• Like PayPal money generator fee
• Look at Dmitri now?
• All friends love Dmitri and bow
• Ain't you like Dmitri friends?
• I am going to make friends proud of me now!

• I am great rapper
• I never mean to hurt you
• I never mean to make friend cry
• But tonight, Dmitri put down Vodka
• (one more time friends!)
• I am great rapper
• I never mean to hurt you
• I never mean to make friend cry
• But tonight, Dmitri put down Vodka

pewep said:

He just pmed me asking me to do a love spell to attract a 4th wife to him.

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chugcore said:

You have too much time on your hands my friend

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Scorpion Ghost said:

I thought you were singing so I wasted like a minute trying to hear you.

Then I wasted like a minute writing this comment.

Buuuuuuuuuuuu

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Scorpion Ghost said:

But you will never be better than Tupac's greatest disciple!

He has mic, he has camera, he has gun, he has bombs. Sorry pal...

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Red Soviet said:

shiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeet. You are right comrade...

Dmitri might be to old for rap scene. Young punk teen better than Dmitri.....


NOT! Dmitri may no have mic or gun or boom boom or camera, but Dmitri have one thing punk kids not have..

PRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIDE!

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YourGuruForLife said:

You are beginning to rub on me, I sort of starting to like you. You are not that bad, although, I kinda feel sorry to tell you this but I think you might be a little bit slow, but a smart guy.

I think in the future you and I should like help out the community and create something : like a SEO guide or like a free software bot.

You are russian right? I'm sure you know how to code

We could call it GuruSoviet bot , or something where we combined Guru and Soviet as the name, and offer it for free.

I think the top two options we could do is a free ultimate SEO guide or like an instagram bot. What do you think @Red Soviet ?

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Red Soviet said:

Dmitri know Dmitri not smart. This not problem.

I will thinking about coding bot for black hat forum in future.


We are comrades once more...

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YourGuruForLife said:

Yeah no problem, we could both code bot for black hat forum in future. But a better bot, like maybe ultimate instagram bot. Like maybe call it InstaSovietGuru bot for instagram, and make it open source it as well. Make a better bot than massplanner.

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Red Soviet said:

Dmitri need honest opinion.

I am hard like rock. No man can hurt feelings of mine.

Be honest of song.

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1. Most of the lines made no sense (e.g., "Like bunny is dummy licking up all my honey").
2. In the first verse, you rhymed "friend" with "friend".
3. I'm not sure what the song is about.
   
4. You didn't finish it for some reason.
5. Everything else...

Zwielicht said:

Well, I'll just be honest with you and say that I didn't like your song for the following reasons:

1. Most of the lines made no sense (e.g., "Like bunny is dummy licking up all my honey").
2. In the first verse, you rhymed "friend" with "friend".
3. I'm not sure what the song is about.
   
4. You didn't finish it for some reason.
5. Everything else...

It's nice that you're interested in improving your English, but I don't think rap is right way to go. Try something like Duolingo, read books in English, or just keep chatting with the members here.

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