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NEED HELP Is this readable article ?

Discussion in 'Making Money' started by loveghost003, Dec 19, 2013.

  1. loveghost003

    loveghost003 Regular Member

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    Hi
    Guys I've problem in writing articles since I don't have the ability writing English articles, So I used ChimpRewriter to rewrite an article to new one [Semi-autorewrite with manual spining].
    Here is a test, an I want some native speakers to read and review the article to tell me the READABILITY level.
    -Is this article readable?
    -Do you feel the spin process?
    -Will you continue reading this article if you looking for something or will you stop reading and close the page?

    -Do you think that I can use examples like this article to publish in my money site? will visitors read the whole articles without feeling the spin process?

    I think you guys got my point, and REALLY thank you :)

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  2. Oukast

    Oukast Senior Member

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    I'm not a native speaker and even I can see how bad that is...

    Let me also add that you never, never use spun content on money site. Never. T2 tops...
     
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  3. loveghost003

    loveghost003 Regular Member

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    Any more reviews!
     
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    heartnet02 Power Member

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    I just read a few words and I did not even finished reading the first sentence but I can tell that the content is really not readable. I can already tell that it is a spinned article by how many words were used in the first sentence especially the stop words. I suggest you hire a writer to write for you.
     
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    Seo_content Regular Member

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    Brother don't use this tool - lol too bad content. No one will even dare to read after 1st line. I'm sorry but you have to spend some money in making good readable content. :) Google is very strict now on content quality.
     
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  6. ZeroDouble

    ZeroDouble Newbie

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    I'm a native English speaker and to be honest it isn't that bad. There *are* a few bits that need some work, but to your average reader they would probably just think that it was written by a non native, as opposed to being spun.

    If it's (what google considers to be) unique then you can put it on your money site no problems, whether it will persuade anyone to convert and buy your product/click your affiliate link is another matter.

    Personally, I'd just use content like that for tier 1, if that's the route you want to go.
     
  7. loveghost003

    loveghost003 Regular Member

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    THAT IS EXACTLY WHAT I'M TALKING A BOUT, I'LL TELL WHY:
    4 months ago i wanted to test something, i wanted to test RUBBISH content with google what will make, so I made a blogger about a niche and I spun 10 articles by spinnerchief free version, the articles were really rubbish, the readability was like %10 and the articles were not completely unique, I published the 10 articles,,,, and now, I made $6 from adsense in the last month,,,,,,, ya, easy money.
    So I think now if I make a lot of websites [blogger] lets say 50 site and every site has 10 spun articles but the readability is up %70 like the article above, i can make a good money.
    50 site * $3/month [average] = $150/month [not bad for me]
    I hope u understand me guys, any reviewers or ideas?
     
  8. CazuaL

    CazuaL Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    It's not bad but not worth your time either
    Making 50 sites with 500 articles (10 each) will take some time when all you need to do is make ONE site and get decent, high quality articles written by a native English speaker, much better in the long run
    Do it right then $150/month will look like change
     
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  9. MillionDollarBucks

    MillionDollarBucks Junior Member

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    Hi,

    If it pass the copyspace then it will be okay.