Your page? U want my honest opinion?? lol If that is going to be permanent, look into using LPR (Landing page robot) or Optimize press. You will convert a lot better than that static picture. PLEASE DO NOT TAKE OFFENSE I AM ONLY TRYING TO HELP but the picture you made is too large, the sign up button is not big enough to capture attention and there is little to no info giving explanations. These are all big marketing no no's.
I am not an expert by any means but i think u could convert much better with those tips. Dont just take my word for it bro, test everything and see what works for you. THere is no IM rulebook