Need constructive criticism and tips on how to improce this

Discussion in 'FaceBook' started by Daveros, Feb 26, 2010.

  1. Daveros

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    h**p://www.facebook.com/apps/application.php?id=330327910671

    Any one any tips or suggestions on how to improve this? its my first go

    Thanks