Money Making Mini Websites - Give Away

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Hello Friends,

I just finished my first software application and all your help is appreciated.

Because English is not my native language, I?m giving away 5 licenses to those who will help me to make the text on my website more attractive to prospects and the manual and text in the application more complete and professional.

If you?re interested in helping me, please let me know asap.

DO NOT BUY THE SOFTWARE NOW!

Next week I will post it in the ?Buy, Sell or Trade? section at a discount price for BHW members!

You can review my website and download a demo version at http://www.moneymakingminiwebsites.com

Thanks in advance!
 
Ok, I just spent about 1/2 hour and used your software from beginning to end. Would I buy it? Depends on the cost, but i'll say YES. Its a great way to flash together a quickie landing page with all the affiliate bells and whistles. I would like to see a few more options as far as layout, although again, this site is for purpose, not to win awards. Your manual is fantastic for those of us who like visual instruction. Short and to the point.
Your sales site just looks to need a bit of tweaking, as I think you're selling your software too "quietly". Talk more about money and how much can be made in a short amount of time. Get more excited in your text, this is a great product and I can tell you, i'm already excited about it! Eagerly looking forward to getting it!

Thanks for your feedback and lending me a helping hand.

Copy send ... 4 left.
 
Hello Friends,

I just finished my first software application and all your help is appreciated.

Because English is not my native language, I?m giving away 5 licenses to those who will help me to make the text on my website more attractive to prospects and the manual and text in the application more complete and professional.

If you?re interested in helping me, please let me know asap.

DO NOT BUY THE SOFTWARE NOW!

Next week I will post it in the ?Buy, Sell or Trade? section at a discount price for BHW members!

You can review my website and download a demo version at http://www.moneymakingminiwebsites.com

Thanks in advance!

Sorry for the late reply, mememe. I have only just seen your posting.

Unless it's too late, I would be more than happy to re-write your website text sales page for you. With respect, and mindful that English isn't your native language, it is too weak.

For example, the first paragraph starting with, "Thank you very much for your interest. In a few minutes you can download a demo version or buy a license of the Money Making Mini Websites Software Package but first take the time to learn what this amazing tool can do for you".

While the English is correct, it is way too polite and needs to be more aggressive. For example:

Want a Money Making Mini Website that will earn you money 24/7 completely on autopilot?

Got a minute? Because that's all it takes to build your website with this easy to use software that guarantees your online success.

For the next few minutes you can download the demo version of the hottest Money Making Mini Website Software Package on the Internet today.....etc.

PM me, if you think I can help.

themagician
 
Sorry for the late reply, mememe. I have only just seen your posting.

Unless it's too late, I would be more than happy to re-write your website text sales page for you. With respect, and mindful that English isn't your native language, it is too weak.

For example, the first paragraph starting with, "Thank you very much for your interest. In a few minutes you can download a demo version or buy a license of the Money Making Mini Websites Software Package but first take the time to learn what this amazing tool can do for you".

While the English is correct, it is way too polite and needs to be more aggressive. For example:

Want a Money Making Mini Website that will earn you money 24/7 completely on autopilot?

Got a minute? Because that's all it takes to build your website with this easy to use software that guarantees your online success.

For the next few minutes you can download the demo version of the hottest Money Making Mini Website Software Package on the Internet today.....etc.

PM me, if you think I can help.

themagician

Thanks for your feedback and lending me a helping hand.

Copy send ... 3 left for those who can help me to write some follow-up emails. Other ideas are always welcome.
 
Hi, I have some suggestions for the software.

1.) The install doesn't give an option to install to a drive other than C. (the usual way to change the install path is greyed out).
This is okay for the average user who got everything on C but will scare away users who have a tight system like "Windows on C" "Progs on D" and "Data on E". Look if you can activate the usual install options.

2.) This is a serious thing you should look into.
You can't rezize the window of the software which mean if your screen settings don't comply with the regular settings you have to use scrollbars. This is bad and will scare customers away cause the program is to cumbersome to work with.
Don't forget that with modern monitors (LCD) and graphic cards with high resolutions people tend to increase their font size in windows. This means not al text and options will fit in the window, thus creating scrollbars.
Make the window of the app reziseable (you know, with the two arrow cursor when placed in a corner) and your customers will be able to have the software fill as much of their screen as possible.

Hope this helps. The software looks very promising so I wouldn't mind a free license and take it for a longer test drive.
 
I made a test site, and what stands out for me are these points:

I agree with the previous post about not resizing the window, it does make it difficult, but still works fine.

It would be nice to be able to use our own custom logos and graphics in the header + footer template designs. The template is almost too simple, but it being a demo I understand.

The MMMW popup cannot be closed, which I am assuming is because it is the demo version, and it would be nice to see how and where the google, amazon, and ebay ads are displayed in the template page.

You said English is not your first language, but I think you do very well with it :) I noticed the Florida address on the main page - do you live in the USA?

I think with several more pre-made templates, layouts, and color combinations this will be a great piece of software for quick site creation, also would be cool to create all additional pages at one time - example: page1.html, page2.html, page3.html etc... That way the pages would be created in a folder, like 'MMMW' and each page1.html, page2.html, etc.. would be created and linked in the folder and easily uploadable.

Edit: Also, the 1st language option for installation is Estonian (I am assuming this is your language) but since I speak English it threw me off guard. Maybe you can use the customer's default language to specify the default installation language displayed.
 
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i agree with satan i think you should really do a quick update of this software before you release it to the market i would like to see this updates of premade templates, layouts, and color combinations our own custom logos and graphics in the header + footer template designs like satan suggest if you add those features this will be a sweet little website builder.
 
oh - 1 more thing - when I signed up as an affiliate for MMMW, both emails were sent to my spam folder in Gmail which doesn't usually happen with my opt-in sign-ups, just FYI.
 
Hi
I'm trying out the demo of your application.
I agree with blackhit. The user should be able to install the application on ANY drive, not just C:. I have limited capacity on Drive C and try to place all marketing apps together on my D Drive.
Also I like to define my own shortcuts in related folders.

Might I also suggest that instead of using a long scrolling window that each step be placed on a tabbed form or have multiple pages linked with next and back buttons.

I agree with including a multi page creation idea and more templates with the inclusion of user header and footer graphics.

In all a nice little application that I could see myself recommending to my customers.
 
Just like to add: The application creates a nice page, but would like to be able to see the finished result with ads.
 
Hi fellows,

Thank you all for the advice!

Sorry for the late reply but I had some personal problems I had to handle first. :(

I will go through all the posts in detail and give feedback soon.
 
I went through all the posts and here's my feedback...

RECENT CHANGES
  • user can choose the install path
  • window is resizable
  • affiliate program through ClickBank (f*****g Paypal terminated my account)

TODO LIST

July - August (or asap)
  • templates and/or customizable header and footer
  • create multiple pages at one time
When I have the money (I'm completely broke at the moment)
  • complete make over as a real software application
  • create, manage, save, edit projects
  • ...

The MMMW popup cannot be closed, which I am assuming is because it is the demo version
You can close the popup by clicking the white X in the right upper corner.

it would be nice to see how and where the google, amazon, and ebay ads are displayed in the template page.
You can see this on the sales page, not in demo version.

the 1st language option for installation is Estonian
Very strange, I always get English as default install language.
 
banarm as PM on 06-29-2008 said:
Sure, i'd be glad to help in any way I can. Let me look it over and i'll send suggestions. You did a great job by the way, its a fantastic program!

banarm as PM on 06-29-2008 said:
Ok, I have some already written and will have it done by tomorrow morning...

banarm, are you still alive? When will I receive the tweak you promised? When will you respond to PM's?

themagician as PM on 07-01-2008 said:
As you already have someone doing this for you, I'll bow out as I am mega-busy, as always, but wanted to lend a hand if you were stuck.

Still mega-busy magician? It seems banarm left the house. :(
 
(tip) Remove the dynamic 6oo6le ads on the sample site,they can ban you for that.
 
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