Made My Landing Page *Feed-back* Made 2 sells directed linking it

Axelivan17

Axelivan17

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Hello, Everyone! I will respond to all insightful replies. Very determined to make money and yes I am a newbie. Made my first 2 sells 12/26/16 and 12/29/16. I want it to be everyday. I will have very targeted keywords 110% better than before.

I would LOVE feed-back and recommendations for My Landing Page.

Yes I will add an email capture after I get 2 more sells. Need to make the landing page convert FIRST!

http://diabete-cure.com

Any thoughts. I will run Bing Ads
 

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Looks good, but you should capture emails as soon as you can, perhaps in exchange fir a free report?

How did you drive traffic before bing ads?
 
you got 51,22$ from 2 sales eventho it only costs 54 ? thats nice :o
 
Jason Bradbury said:
Looks good, but you should capture emails as soon as you can, perhaps in exchange fir a free report?

How did you drive traffic before bing ads?
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I ran Bing ads from the start blindly without tracking with no negative targeted keywords. The landing needs work. I will need to improve my keywords quality score.
 
The set of keywords you target and landing page must be extremely relavent. Think like a naive user who reaches bing search for a specific product or service. You just need those highly targeted keywords. And also stick with only search term results ads. Ignore display ads. Would love to see how you perform on this. Cheers!
 
LJ Junior said:
The set of keywords you target and landing page must be extremely relavent. Think like a naive user who reaches bing search for a specific product or service. You just need those highly targeted keywords. And also stick with only search term results ads. Ignore display ads. Would love to see how you perform on this. Cheers!
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Text Ads. beginning to tweak site
 
Also your domain name is spelled wrong, it should be "diabetescure" unless you wanted it to say "diabetecure" which actually does kind of make sense.

The product looks good though, but yeah I think some people might view that domain name as a typo.
 
MatteoMatt said:
Also your domain name is spelled wrong, it should be "diabetescure" unless you wanted it to say "diabetecure" which actually does kind of make sense.

The product looks good though, but yeah I think some people might view that domain name as a typo.
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Not a typo- want it as close to diabetes cure as possible. that shouldn't affect much
 
The last paragraph contains two flaws in my opinion:

1- It doesn’t include a call to action (a link to the Order page). The buyer has to scroll up to click the link. Usually the link at the end of a landing page is the most clicked on.

2- You mentioned two flaws of the product at the wrong time, where the buyer’s desire should be at its pick. You should have pictured how the customer’s life will change to a healthy and happy one.
 
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