Made my first ClickBank landing page, please critque

JohnnyRabbit

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this is my first landing page that I created.

please critique as I don't know what else to add/revise..

plz PM me if you will critique and tell me what i should improve

thanks

 

Last edited: Jan 7, 2011

hswklkev

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why dont you post URL here?

 

sire243

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yea lol please post it '_____'

 

math182

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I don't see any url mate..

 

rpkrocks

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math182 said:

I don't see any url mate..

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OP said

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plz "PM me" if you will critique and tell me what i should improve

 

Bryan

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i understand he said to PM him but why dont you just post it here, so that way people know about it earlier and start making sites for it once it goes live people can start promoting it, think its better that way imo

 

math182

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rpkrocks said:

OP said

Code:

plz "PM me" if you will critique and tell me what i should improve

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Yeah thanks im completely retarded...


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