Made my first ClickBank landing page, please critque

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  1. JohnnyRabbit

    JohnnyRabbit BANNED BANNED

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    this is my first landing page that I created.

    please critique as I don't know what else to add/revise..

    plz PM me if you will critique and tell me what i should improve :D

    thanks
     
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  2. zykev69

    zykev69 Jr. VIP Jr. VIP

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    why dont you post URL here?
     
  3. sire243

    sire243 Regular Member

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    yea lol please post it '_____'
     
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    I don't see any url mate..
     
  5. rpkrocks

    rpkrocks BANNED BANNED

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    OP said

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    plz "PM me" if you will critique and tell me what i should improve
    
     
  6. Bryan

    Bryan Power Member

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    i understand he said to PM him but why dont you just post it here, so that way people know about it earlier and start making sites for it once it goes live people can start promoting it, think its better that way imo
     
  7. math182

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    Yeah thanks im completely retarded...


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