Logo Design Critique
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liman
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- Nov 12, 2015
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I agree with that. It looks sharp while everything else is smooth.
nayannp
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thank you all for your valueble critiques i am still more more
nayannp
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Malificent
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- Jul 29, 2015
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Looks good. Love the colors
studio2a3d
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- Apr 28, 2018
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Logo is an important part of your business so whenever you going to design your business logo just think about your advertisement and then design a unique logo for your business. I will suggest you to design your logo from a experience holder person !!
Wutnax
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- May 18, 2018
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Personally, I really like it.
I feel the full orange one suits the design, however if you were to go ahead with that I’d recommend a change in typeface for “software solutions”.
In my opinion the font you chose looks tacky and free (which it may be but that’s besides the point).
Spruce it up, make it look clean and professional and I think with a few minor adjustments you could be on to a winner.
Good job so far buddy.
Allen_Bush
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- Jul 12, 2018
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Great work buddy looks good.
Alae63
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- Apr 14, 2018
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Hi.
It's actually pretty decent i like the concept and the colors of it , well done there !
just one quick advice for you to use in thefuture,, whenever you publish/give a preview design to a client , never put the logo in a big size like that , always try to make it as small as possible , it makes the logo looks much much better (you can checkout the highly rated designers over behance/dribble so u get what i mean)
Best of luck
It's actually pretty decent i like the concept and the colors of it , well done there !
just one quick advice for you to use in thefuture,, whenever you publish/give a preview design to a client , never put the logo in a big size like that , always try to make it as small as possible , it makes the logo looks much much better (you can checkout the highly rated designers over behance/dribble so u get what i mean)
Best of luck
nayannp
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Thanks for this great advice,i will keep it in my mind.Hi.
It's actually pretty decent i like the concept and the colors of it , well done there !
just one quick advice for you to use in thefuture,, whenever you publish/give a preview design to a client , never put the logo in a big size like that , always try to make it as small as possible , it makes the logo looks much much better (you can checkout the highly rated designers over behance/dribble so u get what i mean)
Best of luck
Bots-Scrapers
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Change text to some kind of office format - can not remember what was that but that will look very much perfect.
- May 29, 2018
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It's bad, period! I appreciate that the other members try to push you, but take it from a fellow logo designer (6+ years) that this logo isn't something to showcase in your portfolio at the end of the day. But again, if you are paid less than $30 then it's fine, above $100 you will not have a long life within this field.
Allow me to give some constructive feedback:
1. Creativity: I still can't find the idea behind the concept. It's a sun and the other two swooshy vertical things are related to what? Make it a bit high-tech, use some effects to give a 3d effect (not extrude or something) just some nice gradients. Use something that will related to the niche the company is. Right now, even if it's an abstract thing, it still doesn't look related to the niche.
2. Execution: Don't know what software you used to build (hope it's something to create vectors not raster graphics) but you have unhealthy (amateur) end-points to some lines
3. Color Pallet: Bad, very bad! The idea it's good with blue + orange but it's very bad that you choose to use the complementary orange and blue (I think you know what I mean with that). The Orange on Orange it's a no-no. That version when will be resized to smaller version will be indistinguishable for the viewer and the details will be missed. Like this
4. Fonts. As a rule: Swooshy Icon = Swoshy fonts (Sans serif fonts in this case). Myself I would go with a very bold font for main word and a very light font for the words underneath (huge letter spacing). Try not to use any underline since it's outdated. The "point" above "i" it's a very good idea with changing the color. Myself I would change also the shape of it. Why not making same shape as the sun, resized to a smaller version to fit the "i"?
- Don't forget about the kerning typography in logo design when you build a logo. Google it!
5. Overall presentation. Good choices for light background and dark background but use plain white and black since this is mostly what the client will use it across the web (or offline in print). It's a bit too simple in my opinion, you can do way better with the presentation. If you look in the web there are countless of freebies with already built mockups to use: desktop view, mac view, iphone view, business cards, billboards, car etc etc etc
Even it's saturated this field is not so hard, you have 1-2 books to read about Logo design and then you are good to go as pro. Remember "Good artist copy it, great artists steal"(Picasso) + "When you just started in marketing area, just copy from someone else but make sure the copy is better than the original" (David Ogilvy)
Allow me to give some constructive feedback:
1. Creativity: I still can't find the idea behind the concept. It's a sun and the other two swooshy vertical things are related to what? Make it a bit high-tech, use some effects to give a 3d effect (not extrude or something) just some nice gradients. Use something that will related to the niche the company is. Right now, even if it's an abstract thing, it still doesn't look related to the niche.
2. Execution: Don't know what software you used to build (hope it's something to create vectors not raster graphics) but you have unhealthy (amateur) end-points to some lines
3. Color Pallet: Bad, very bad! The idea it's good with blue + orange but it's very bad that you choose to use the complementary orange and blue (I think you know what I mean with that). The Orange on Orange it's a no-no. That version when will be resized to smaller version will be indistinguishable for the viewer and the details will be missed. Like this
4. Fonts. As a rule: Swooshy Icon = Swoshy fonts (Sans serif fonts in this case). Myself I would go with a very bold font for main word and a very light font for the words underneath (huge letter spacing). Try not to use any underline since it's outdated. The "point" above "i" it's a very good idea with changing the color. Myself I would change also the shape of it. Why not making same shape as the sun, resized to a smaller version to fit the "i"?
- Don't forget about the kerning typography in logo design when you build a logo. Google it!
5. Overall presentation. Good choices for light background and dark background but use plain white and black since this is mostly what the client will use it across the web (or offline in print). It's a bit too simple in my opinion, you can do way better with the presentation. If you look in the web there are countless of freebies with already built mockups to use: desktop view, mac view, iphone view, business cards, billboards, car etc etc etc
Even it's saturated this field is not so hard, you have 1-2 books to read about Logo design and then you are good to go as pro. Remember "Good artist copy it, great artists steal"(Picasso) + "When you just started in marketing area, just copy from someone else but make sure the copy is better than the original" (David Ogilvy)
VisualAlterantion
Newbie
- Aug 19, 2018
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Very good work you doing it alone?
