Logo design Critic

Resize the logo to (lets say 300x(something). Can you see the details of the logo (icons)?

I would assume not based on what I see above.

What is the point of using two different fonts? Makes it look unprofessional. I would also place Bali beside the Skydive not below it.
 
Resize the logo to (lets say 300x(something). Can you see the details of the logo (icons)?

I would assume not based on what I see above.

What is the point of using two different fonts? Makes it look unprofessional. I would also place Bali beside the Skydive not below it.
First of all Thank you @Visual Eagle for you Precious critic i will be definately looking on your point
I would like to say that its a vector so i can definately change its size.
Also if i would have putted the bali with the skydive text then it would have been a too long title so i decided to put it below,also i decided to put a anchor in the logo connected with bali so it would have looked bad with the same kind of text so i decided to change the font for bali to make it look in flow it the anchor
 
I think it's OK. Depends, who will use it for what. Just one thing, the letters are asymmetric
 
I think it's OK. Depends, who will use it for what. Just one thing, the letters are asymmetric
Thanks for bringing this into my attention:)
 
I agree with krishnaverma, the "S" needs to be changed, and it looks good but its not unique. "Bali" needs to be changed and placed better somehow, try different things or look for inspiration by others maybe it'll help you or give you an idea of what to do.
 
Well i dont know much about skydiving but why is there an anchor at all? is it because of bali? Kinda confusing to me tbh
 
Well i dont know much about skydiving but why is there an anchor at all? is it because of bali? Kinda confusing to me tbh

Agree on this. Skydiving and an anchor gives me a bad feeling lol
 
I do like the first style gives a simple clean look, maybe just the small things but besides i like!
 
I quite like it although I am not too sure on the drop shadow on Bali, and the little man in the left corner is a little random, especially as you have the anchor there too. These two details make the logo 'spill over' a little bit, I always think logos look best when they can fit into a box neatly, if it makes sense
 
Simplify as much as possible, so that it looks professional, there is too much going on on your logo right now, the fonts you used don't pair well, the distortion on the 'S' doesn't have any meaning here and it's unbalancing the wordmark. I invite you to read articles about the 5 basic types of logos which are: Logotype, Lettermark, Icon/Symbol, Combination mark and Badge/Seal. Your logo contains two separate icons, you shouldn't do that.
Look at Behance/Books for inspiration, you will have a better knowledge of how a good logo should look like. Good luck.
 
It's quite good. Many companies use much worse graphics, your job looks professional.

However, we have a few comments. Using two types of fonts is not a mistake in our opinion, but yours are too different . It looks a bit odd. In addition, this anchor in the bottom right corner does not seem to fit. Maybe it would be worth it to get rid of it?
 
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