keyword density - what am i doing wrong?

I populated a page with kws obviously following on page seo.
I did this check with seo chat's software.
It is breaking LOS ANGELES!
will google do the same?

am i doing anything wrong?

generally how many kws should i stuff in a page's text?


service los angeles 8 2.27%
maid service los 8 2.27%
cleaning of your 5 1.42%
your home we 4 1.13%
angeles maid service 3 0.85%
los angeles maid 3 0.85%
los angeles maids 3 0.85%
angeles maids services 3 0.85%
we want you 2 0.57%
you completely satisfied 2 0.57%
want you completely 2 0.57%
services maid service 2 0.57%
carry workersandrsquo comp 1 0.28%

One page should rank for just one keyword. Every page has its rankings for 1-2 keywords. Ranking for more then 3 keyw on the same page can only be a result of a very good backlinking campaign

plex_brahial said:

One page should rank for just one keyword. Every page has its rankings for 1-2 keywords. Ranking for more then 3 keyw on the same page can only be a result of a very good backlinking campaign

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Ha!
One keyword? Seriously?
Do you make any money at all?

eeha123
Keep your keywords at 5-6% and you'll might see a change in SERP

Plex_brahial is right, 2 kw per page

Thanks for the info, being a newbie I assumed he more keywords the greater the return, I optimize now