Just made my first email form

sscaz · May 17, 2023

I am creating websites for 5 years (Mainly they were never websites that require mail forms (Streaming/Download sites, etc) and so I made my first mail form and thought to ask you guys what do you think?

Does it looks good enough or is it bad?

awesomewebsites · May 17, 2023

It is good. Fonts can be made more readable if possible.

sscaz · May 17, 2023

awesomewebsites said:
It is good. Fonts can be made more readable if possible.

Got any recommendation?

awesomewebsites · May 17, 2023

sscaz said:
Got any recommendation

Which tool you used to create this?

sscaz · May 17, 2023

awesomewebsites said:
Which tool you used to create this?

Optin Mail wordpressp lugin took me a lot of time to find a good plugin tbh and this worked the best will be connecting it to either brevo or sendgrid to collect my first mail list :strong:

Pythagore · May 17, 2023

Looks good according to me.

Komal Tahir · May 18, 2023

Yeah its looking good

GenesisOne · May 18, 2023

It is a really primitive one - I think you can do better - plenty of free plugins you may use to improve the looks.
Just my 2 cents as a former graduate web designer.

jadsn · May 18, 2023

Good start. Looks like too much red though. The color red is synonymous with warning/danger.

I think just the border and call to action button should be colored. Black on the text, and light grey on the placeholder text.

Usually what I do is find an opt-in box from a website that's crushing it (most likely they split tested to find the best variation), and just steal their design. Good artists copy, great artists steal.

sscaz · May 18, 2023

GenesisOne said:
It is a really primitive one - I think you can do better - plenty of free plugins you may use to improve the looks.
Just my 2 cents as a former graduate web designer.

What plugins to use?

sscaz · May 18, 2023

jadsn said:
Good start. Looks like too much red though. The color red is synonymous with warning/danger.

I think just the border and call to action button should be colored. Black on the text, and light grey on the placeholder text.

Usually what I do is find an opt-in box from a website that's crushing it (most likely they split tested to find the best variation), and just steal their design. Good artists copy, great artists steal.

Website itself is fully red that's why i was thinking of making it red

jadsn · May 18, 2023

sscaz said:
Website itself is fully red that's why i was thinking of making it red

I'd do a contrasting color in that case, to make it stand out from the rest of the flow.

sscaz · May 18, 2023

jadsn said:
I'd do a contrasting color in that case, to make it stand out from the rest of the flow

Header and text is red while background is white

sscaz · May 18, 2023

awesomewebsites said:
It is good. Fonts can be made more readable if possible.

jadsn said:
I'd do a contrasting color in that case, to make it stand out from the rest of the flow.

Pythagore said:
Looks good according to me.

Hey guys sorry for bother but what do you think:

I put the text "Receive E-Book" for mail submit should i change it to "Subscribe Now"? Or should i put somewhere the text explaining that to people that they will need to input the email there?

uncutu · May 18, 2023

im sure theres lots of case studies on what copywriting performs best on those buttons
https://www.google.com/search?q=high+converting+cta+button

sscaz · May 18, 2023

uncutu said:
im sure theres lots of case studies on what copywriting performs best on those buttons
https://www.google.com/search?q=high+converting+cta+button

Hey thank you for the help, this is first email list that i am creating so still don't know a lot of stuff! Anyway thank you for your help and this link i will check it out now! I am thinking of rather putting the text to be something corelating to what i am offering for them to subscrime to mail

jadsn · May 19, 2023

sscaz said:
Hey guys sorry for bother but what do you think:
View attachment 256927

I put the text "Receive E-Book" for mail submit should i change it to "Subscribe Now"? Or should i put somewhere the text explaining that to people that they will need to input the email there?

Wow, much better. This looks sick.

For the button, I always found that a generic CTA works better, so I'd go with "Subscribe Now" or just "Subscribe".

GenesisOne · May 19, 2023

sscaz said:
Hey guys sorry for bother but what do you think:
View attachment 256927

I put the text "Receive E-Book" for mail submit should i change it to "Subscribe Now"? Or should i put somewhere the text explaining that to people that they will need to input the email there?

Much better

Obsidian Knight · May 19, 2023

That second one looks way better!

Salamouna · May 19, 2023

Hurt my eyes

Just made my first email form

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