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just finished my webshop

Discussion in 'White Hat SEO' started by smash-wear.nl, Jan 9, 2010.

  1. smash-wear.nl

    smash-wear.nl Regular Member

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    hello all

    First, I am not here to promote my website. I've just finished my webshop and would like some comments to improve my website, it is a shop that sells women's clothing. smash-wear.

    This is my webshop http://www.smash-wear.nl​
     
  2. jakeruston

    jakeruston Junior Member

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    I'm really not a fan of the background image, it just seems so... random basically. Another thing I noticed was on your clothes pages, such as http://www.smash-wear.nl/a-9411291/dameskleding/dog-4876-dameskleding , if you scroll down there is a huge list of random words repeated over and over again. Is that supposed to be there? I think it should be removed. Hope I helped.
     
  3. TinyHulk

    TinyHulk BANNED BANNED

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    Ik denk niet dat iemand daar wat gaat kopen
     
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    subster Elite Member

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    I'll like the clothes you sell - nice stuff for women!
    The bad thing: The design is not really good and doesn't come close to design of the clothes. It's like selling diamonds out from a mud hole.

    Sorry - it definitely has to be improved.
     
  5. ntlntl

    ntlntl Registered Member

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    it looks weird...I personally believe it.

    I think you can try some shopping cart software, eg prestashop etc...

    automated things sometimes are better than doing everything solo. just my 2cents
     
  6. dailyearner

    dailyearner BANNED BANNED

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    create a sitemap
    then submit to google
    i checked your subpage
    the same keyword as homepage
    that is not so good enough
     
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  7. smash-wear.nl

    smash-wear.nl Regular Member

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    Ik heb al aardig wat verkocht en ik verdien er goed aan.
    maar wat zou jij veranderen dan. en waarom denk je dat.
     
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    smash-wear.nl Regular Member

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    thats ar the keywords for google
     
  9. smash-wear.nl

    smash-wear.nl Regular Member

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    changed colors, it is now better. I hope
     
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    smash-wear.nl Regular Member

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    Y have updated the website, its better nowe
     
  11. fearos

    fearos Junior Member

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    No offence but its looks like one of those turn key websites you an buy on ebay. I would make the banner with more sharper colours. Get rid of those boxes around the dresses. Get rid of that tiled background. The side navigation bar needs to be changed. Get some ideas from here http://www.asos.com/Women/Dresses/Cat/pgecategory.aspx?cid=8799. With females they have to like the look of website aswell! I can tell my mrs is like that! good luck you have some good products there.
     
  12. Googler

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    You modified oscommerce open source script right?
    Posted via Mobile Device
     
  13. smash-wear.nl

    smash-wear.nl Regular Member

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    have take away the black line's is it better so
     
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    smash-wear.nl Regular Member

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    no y use webshop software from amsterdam, http://www.mijnwebwinkel.nl.