Just "finished" my site, experts please take a quick look? :)

Hey guys, I just finished the skeleton of my site I think. I just want people to have a look and tell me if this is a good way of marketing a Clickbank product.

My goal: to rank 1st for 2 keywords related to my niche and make sales.

Is my home page a good pre-sale? Is it too long? What is your opinion? Any other criticisms to make? This is my first website

Thank you so much.

http://www.increaseyourverticalhq.com

Not bad for your first site. Doing it in wordpress is a great start. Keep up the good work. What key words are you going after?

Brady

Very nice, but if you want to make a sale before next July, you'll need to employ the full range of tactics available here on BHW. You will need to "help google along" to finding out how "great" your content is before you see much SE traffic.

Also, your niche is not low competition. It's full of blackhatters using spam techniques. You can out-spam them, but you'll need more than 7 backlinks, which is what you have now.

excellent

okay but according to backlink checker http://www.backlinkwatch.com/index.php i have 52 backlinks?

i am trying to rank for keyword "increase your vertical" and "jump higher"

i have bookmarking demon and i have a spare desktop computer that i can run programs off/use for automation - it has internet connection too.

i use my laptop for all actual developing websites/content/reading forums.

i am wondering if you could point me in the direction of some stuff I could use my free desktop computer to automate so that I can get better rankings in google.

thanks for the help

i really appreciate the comments