is this shitty?

Trying out a new landing page...would love some thoughts

thanks
j

www.arcsselfdefense.com/demo

Looks WAY better than mine, lol! Good luck, man!

If you wanna stick with WP for a landing page, then pick a better theme to suit those needs and mix up the colors a bit. Taking your main site template and just rearranging stuff doesn't work. There's themes out there that are made just for landing pages. This product would look good on a well built LP with more custom graphics. Way too much RED imo. Need some yellows/greens in there somewhere. The graphics on there atm really don't stand out and catch the eye. Change the font. Bigger. Maybe something unique looking? You got the content - just tweek it up.

http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs22/f/2007/324/2/2/Black_Diamond_Plate_by_rebstile.jpg the sidebar boxes would look cool too. I'd search or insert nuts on the four corners. I'd make the overall feel of the LP very hardcore / spartan looking, but super clean and uncluttered. Your video should be sitting within a border of some kind too imo.