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is this a good spun content ??

Discussion in 'Making Money' started by amirov137, Nov 12, 2015.

  1. amirov137

    amirov137 Registered Member

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    i am non native English and i don't have the ability to outsource content. so does this article seems spun ??







    The Original One







    i used auto spin option and i have other spin options like every other, second, third, fourth, fifth word, and heavy spin. and i used to spin the article paragraph randomly to make it more unique.
     
  2. bimmerime

    bimmerime Regular Member

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    looks bad for me
     
  3. Boomba

    Boomba Regular Member

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    Yes, very spun. Some of the meaning is lost with the word choices and the grammar is not good at all.
     
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    Not the worst ive seen to be honest - but yeah its not great
     
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    The spinning didn't work like it should and I see quite a few typos too. What spinner have you used?
     
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    and now that you posted it here, it will be indexed as is it will be duplicated content. Well done.
     
  7. Nicheblogger

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    Not spun enough for my taste. There should be a lot more changes in my opinion to be safe.
     
  8. asap1

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    Shouldn't worry much about it, no one will be reading it and google won't give you a cookie because its readable. At least not yet.

    As long as its 100% unique its fine with me.
     
  9. Brandon Williamson

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    No, it is not a good spun content dude! In my opinion, spinning software cannot replace the manual content writers so, you should hire some content writers.
     
  10. GanXtr

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    just oky but not good, try to rewrite in your words
     
  11. Jerring

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    it doesn't look that good, and yea rewrite it with your own words would probably look a lot better.
     
  12. STONESEO

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    it probably does pass copyscape but the spun in not really that great man.
    also, what spinner did you use?
     
  13. amirov137

    amirov137 Registered Member

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    it's a website called freebestspinner with the auto spin option