Is this a good landing page?

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SilverMovieDownloads

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Is this a good landing page?

made it myself

 

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KayTeePK

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Its so simple , make it a bit Professional or hire some one if you are not expert . Thats the page through which you will earn so make it better .

 

server255

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I like it. Simple and no distractions. No other action to do for the prospect.

I'd add one or two small game graphics or the logo of the game though.

 

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@Seo Lover

I know it is but i am still working on it and i prefer to make my own LPs. thanks for your reply, though.

@server255

Thanks for your nice comment and i will images soon.

 

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theMHR

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If you can smaller the size of text then it will give bit more professional look, I am talking about the sizes of headings

 

gmsniperx

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make it more appealing by adding some rich graphical content!

 

cornkernel

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i agree that you need to add images (and maybe a few different colours?). other than that, i don't mind it! looks alright to me.

just one more thing though... if possible, add some kind of border around the email submit box, because straight from red to white makes my eyes hurt. have a different colour as a border, sort of like the black outline of the text you already have.

good luck!

 

iyalah

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Agree, Pic and Video are essential on landing page. No Vid Hoax

Good luck Mate...