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is it a professional logo and Can i get clients?

Discussion in 'Graphic Design' started by saurabh82, Mar 7, 2015.

  1. saurabh82

    saurabh82 BANNED BANNED

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    just trying to make some good logos in illustrator.Made this logo (attachement)
    Is it good and looking professional? Can i get some clients? If yes then where can i find such clients ?
    i am really looking to make some money with my skills
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  2. JCmcclain

    JCmcclain Junior Member

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    I have all my logos for my sites created over at fiverr. I know very little about graphics but never understood how it is worth the person's time to only charge $5 to create a logo. I would think it would be hard to compete with that.

    It might be a way to make money if you were creating high end logos for upscale companies.
    -JC
     
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  3. Peter Ngo

    Peter Ngo Jr. VIP Jr. VIP

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    ehhh, seriously no offence, it doesn't really look that good.
     
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  4. Aatrox

    Aatrox Supreme Member

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    That does not look professional... at all actually. You used two fonts and placed an image. I can do that and I have no skills in graphics. You need to learn a lot more.
     
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    like 8 years old . A cookie maybe
     
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    Not good, you need improvement.
     
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  7. komo22

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    Like G is your friend, so is Fiverr :D
     
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    Sorry to be harsh - but this doesn't look professional at all. You need to practice more.
     
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    If I got this on Fiverr I would demand a refund...and that's only $5. You got the point?
     
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    Don't place the logo in the middle of the words like that, it's hard to read. It should be on the left or above. The grey font on the bottom looks WAY out of place because of both colour and style. Also, it's spelled "whether". It's very important to use correct spelling.

    Your tagline doesn't sound right either. People don't "do" drama, they are dramatic. "Everyone is dramatic whether they admit it or not" sounds better to me. Maybe even shorten it to "Everyone's Dramatic". I find shorter taglines more effective.

    One more suggestion about your tagline is it seems to be going against the message of the brand. You can't tell someone they're going to recover from something and then tell them everyone has the very problem they want to recover from, which makes it sound normal, which makes it seem as though either they have nothing to recover from or recovery is a guaranteed failure. It's like going to an AA meeting and they tell you everyone on earth is an alcoholic. You'd be wondering "why the hell am I even here then?"

    I don't mean to tear it apart, just trying to offer some constructive criticism. These are some of the things you need to think about when creating a logo and a brand. It can't just sound good, it has to make sense as well.

    EDIT: As others below have said, the spray paint font is a bit much as well
     
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  12. 2DHades

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    Sorry but the logo isn't good. I'd ask for a refund too if it was from fiverr.

    Check out some youtube videos on logo creation. Maybe even hole courses.
     
  13. WizGizmo

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    The "grunge" fonts do not do much for it.
     
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    "Da font" is up with the font?

    Look at the logos below and tell me what they all have in common:
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    That's right, they're simple, unique, captivating, and brandable. Your logo is too intricate and it looks as if it was created with a fancy variation of this spray paint font. What I'm trying to tell you is to simplify the logo a bit (both the crown and the text) and play around with the order of the logo. Create several different drafts of your logo until you create one that you and your clients would find appealing.
     
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    Nice Logo.But make more concise as well.It has to be some what subtle,which is more intuitive.
     
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    Sorry to say but this is not looking professional.
    It is looking like that its a movie's poster.
    Please short the design of the logo.
     
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    Sorry bro but this logo is disaster... everyone could make better logo using online free tools, upload png picture and write some text...

    Dont even try to sell something like this because it will only hurt your reputation...
     
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    With such logo(s) it would be hard to get even a single client. Keep it Simple and you would see progress.
     
  19. Niloc88

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    No, sorry. Keep practicing you'll get better
     
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    Here OP, I was playing with your logo a bit and this is what I came up with. The second example's probably not the best (actually, both are pretty bad examples of a decent logo), although the first one takes advantage of negative space to create a logo.
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