is it a professional logo and Can i get clients?
- Thread starter saurabh82
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I have all my logos for my sites created over at fiverr. I know very little about graphics but never understood how it is worth the person's time to only charge $5 to create a logo. I would think it would be hard to compete with that.
It might be a way to make money if you were creating high end logos for upscale companies.
-JC
It might be a way to make money if you were creating high end logos for upscale companies.
-JC
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Not good, you need improvement.
SkyrocketSEO
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If I got this on Fiverr I would demand a refund...and that's only $5. You got the point?
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Don't place the logo in the middle of the words like that, it's hard to read. It should be on the left or above. The grey font on the bottom looks WAY out of place because of both colour and style. Also, it's spelled "whether". It's very important to use correct spelling.
Your tagline doesn't sound right either. People don't "do" drama, they are dramatic. "Everyone is dramatic whether they admit it or not" sounds better to me. Maybe even shorten it to "Everyone's Dramatic". I find shorter taglines more effective.
One more suggestion about your tagline is it seems to be going against the message of the brand. You can't tell someone they're going to recover from something and then tell them everyone has the very problem they want to recover from, which makes it sound normal, which makes it seem as though either they have nothing to recover from or recovery is a guaranteed failure. It's like going to an AA meeting and they tell you everyone on earth is an alcoholic. You'd be wondering "why the hell am I even here then?"
I don't mean to tear it apart, just trying to offer some constructive criticism. These are some of the things you need to think about when creating a logo and a brand. It can't just sound good, it has to make sense as well.
EDIT: As others below have said, the spray paint font is a bit much as well
Your tagline doesn't sound right either. People don't "do" drama, they are dramatic. "Everyone is dramatic whether they admit it or not" sounds better to me. Maybe even shorten it to "Everyone's Dramatic". I find shorter taglines more effective.
One more suggestion about your tagline is it seems to be going against the message of the brand. You can't tell someone they're going to recover from something and then tell them everyone has the very problem they want to recover from, which makes it sound normal, which makes it seem as though either they have nothing to recover from or recovery is a guaranteed failure. It's like going to an AA meeting and they tell you everyone on earth is an alcoholic. You'd be wondering "why the hell am I even here then?"
I don't mean to tear it apart, just trying to offer some constructive criticism. These are some of the things you need to think about when creating a logo and a brand. It can't just sound good, it has to make sense as well.
EDIT: As others below have said, the spray paint font is a bit much as well
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Zwielicht
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"Da font" is up with the font?
Look at the logos below and tell me what they all have in common:
That's right, they're simple, unique, captivating, and brandable. Your logo is too intricate and it looks as if it was created with a fancy variation of this spray paint font. What I'm trying to tell you is to simplify the logo a bit (both the crown and the text) and play around with the order of the logo. Create several different drafts of your logo until you create one that you and your clients would find appealing.
Look at the logos below and tell me what they all have in common:
That's right, they're simple, unique, captivating, and brandable. Your logo is too intricate and it looks as if it was created with a fancy variation of this spray paint font. What I'm trying to tell you is to simplify the logo a bit (both the crown and the text) and play around with the order of the logo. Create several different drafts of your logo until you create one that you and your clients would find appealing.
Ambitious12
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Sorry to say but this is not looking professional.
It is looking like that its a movie's poster.
Please short the design of the logo.
It is looking like that its a movie's poster.
Please short the design of the logo.
bullsbears
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With such logo(s) it would be hard to get even a single client. Keep it Simple and you would see progress.
Zwielicht
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Here OP, I was playing with your logo a bit and this is what I came up with. The second example's probably not the best (actually, both are pretty bad examples of a decent logo), although the first one takes advantage of negative space to create a logo.
