I need some feedback on my content

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carlosmer24

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Hello everyone I need some feedback on my content for my blog please

cardfrat18.tumblr.com
 
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It needs proofreading, proper punctuation, and formatting. Add images, too, if possible. :)
 
I'm sorry, but it looks boring. Needs images and formatting.
 
I guess the content itself is not bad. It's just that who do you expect to take you seriously when you call your one post tumblr page a blog?
 
carlosmer24 said:
Hello everyone I need some feedback on my content for my blog please

cardfrat18.tumblr.com
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images are not properly displayed and try to use full width content display instead of this center align this honestly not a professional approach but with some effort you able to :)
 
carlosmer24 said:
Hello everyone I need some feedback on my content for my blog please

cardfrat18.tumblr.com
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Apart from the grammar and formatting error, which are obvious, the post doesn't offer anything new for the reader. When you started the list with backlinking you already lost me there. Also, a generic intro doesn't appeal to most readers. Don't start with stuff like. "In this day and age...." Hit the point from the first sentence. Hope this helps. :)
 
denchiro said:
Info might be useful for noobies but there's nothing that catches your eye. Agree with those who say you need more pics and less text, try to shorten it without losing its message.
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I am Noobie myself . I think I should take my time doing research more thank you for the feedback
 
linkshake said:
Apart from the grammar and formatting error, which are obvious, the post doesn't offer anything new for the reader. When you started the list with backlinking you already lost me there. Also, a generic intro doesn't appeal to most readers. Don't start with stuff like. "In this day and age...." Hit the point from the first sentence. Hope this helps. :)
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I will keep that in mind. And will be adding pictures too . Thank you for the feedback
 
BlueBuzzy said:
I guess the content itself is not bad. It's just that who do you expect to take you seriously when you call your one post tumblr page a blog?
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I am still in the proccess of adding more content. thank for the feedback
 
carlosmer24 said:
I am still in the proccess of adding more content. thank for the feedback
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Your best bet would be spending literally not even $20 and buying domain and hosting. Start your website and work on it slowly. Even if you don't have money for links and stuff, it will age as you keep blogging. Plus you will learn a lot along the way.
 
BlueBuzzy said:
Your best bet would be spending literally not even $20 and buying domain and hosting. Start your website and work on it slowly. Even if you don't have money for links and stuff, it will age as you keep blogging. Plus you will learn a lot along the way.
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I have a hosting plan with hostgator with unlimited domains that I use my landing pages on. I will surely buy a domain. Soon
 
sorry but where are the posts? I don't see, or they are invisible for guests?
 
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