I need advice for my review site

hi everyone,

I am newbie and i tell you my story
I try new review site: my-moviepass.org
I bought this domain and outsource 3 review with some people and build page
I created new video and I did everything I knew.
product is cb product and gravity not bad.
I tried splash plugin trying little seo and result big 0.
so i need help how can I make better than.
my first language isn't english so sorry for this

Im not an expert but this site is pretty lifeless, no pictures, no colors, the reviews are too long and not eye catching, and the video with the computer talk seem to be also lifeless... i think u should do more eye catching graphic changing on the website... im also a newb and i dont know alot about IM but if i was a customer i wouldnt buy from this website.

Where is your failure?

Rankings?
Traffic?
Conversions?

I haven't looked at the site, but that info will help to troubleshoot.

When I tried reading one of your articles I was hit by a wall of text. I highly recommend using pictures within the article to keep it interesting to the reader.

I feel like I don't even really know where to click to give you money. Am I supposed to click the ad on the top right of each post and download the movie thing? I don't feel like that is intuitive to people browsing your site (if any). So my advice is to make some bold looking instructions that guide the reader to some sort of link that takes them to the clickbank product site