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I made some Rap Music

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by plonka, May 11, 2016.

  1. plonka

    plonka Newbie

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    Title says it all, let me know what you think! Cant post URLs yet but here it is:

    soundcloud.com/plonka25
     
  2. ilikethecheesecakes

    ilikethecheesecakes Regular Member

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    this is pretty shit. beats are iiite.
    gotta practice more homie
     
  3. jollyman

    jollyman Elite Member

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    You need to improve more as a starter this is fine. Good luck!
     
  4. Sherbert Hoover

    Sherbert Hoover Jr. Executive VIP Jr. VIP

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    The high pitched SSSSSSSSSSSSSSS consistently throughout the songs killed it for me, bro. Good on you for aspiring.
     
  5. blogzandstuff

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    Good on ya, liked it
     
  6. mrfunnysalads

    mrfunnysalads Newbie

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    I don't really like the robotic monotone voice. You should sing with more anger, you know? More emotion and make it louder maybe. Just some piece of feedback
     
  7. HmmngB

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    I love seeing people doing what their passions are. Keep striving for the goal.