I created a video on YouTube and I need your feedback!

VladislavRay

VladislavRay

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Hi guys!

With all the things that have happened recently this year, I started to have more free time so I decided to open a Youtube channel.

The idea of the channel is simple: to teach people simple ways to produce a side income.

It’s not for the average BHW user, it’s for the newbie, average Joe who is just starting out in this world.

This is still in the “beta-testing” and It’s actually the first time when I am sharing.

If you guys can give me feedback on:
how can I improve this video? what is wrong and what is awesome? How can I bring more value to the viewers?

Here is the video and thanks a lot for taking from your time to review it :

 
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Looks really great. I watched all your videos from start to finish! Good quality - good length.
I liked all your videos.
Your icon, theme guy is very good! That's your brand and i recommend to use that more in the future :)
Did you made that yourself or bought from somewhere?

  • I noticed that you have books in the cover. Did you insert those there to branding point of view! (Good)
  • and your teeth is very white. did you go to some clinic or some toothpaste? (good)
 
HustleTong said:
Cool. How do you expect to monetize your channel besides Adsense?
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Thx for the feedback. Hmm..for now, I am just trying to provide value and see if this is for me or not.
These are the first videos and I get really nervous when I have a camera on me :D. Any tips to solve that :)?

Lifeisnotgood said:
Looks really great. I watched all your videos from start to finish! Good quality - good length.
I liked all your videos.
Your icon, theme guy is very good! That's your brand and i recommend to use that more in the future :)
Did you made that yourself or bought from somewhere?

  • I noticed that you have books in the cover. Did you insert those there to branding point of view! (Good)
  • and your teeth is very white. did you go to some clinic or some toothpaste? (good)
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Thanks a lot for this long feedback. I appreciate it and it really helps me.

"Did you made that yourself or bought from somewhere?"
I know a guy from Chile, we worked together on this 4 years ago. Now he is a Fivver Seller, really great guy and illustrator.


"I noticed that you have books in the cover. Did you insert those there to branding point of view! (Good)"
These are the last books I've read in the last 10 - 16 months. Each year I have the same personal goal: Read 12 books/year. (that's just one book per month) It's easy and at the end of the year It adds up.


"and your teeth is very white. did you go to some clinic or some toothpaste? (good) "
Thank you, I get that a lot. My teeth are natural, I believe these are the reason why they are so white:
- I quit all the soda juice (Pepsi, Cola, Sprite etc) 6 years ago
- I don't smoke
- I don't drink coffee
- I try to use low fluoride toothpaste ( less than 800 ppm), I am young so I don't need 1440 fluoride. Check on the back, most of the toothpaste destroys your enamel.
Unfortunately, once you produce damage to your teeth, they will never be the same :(
 
I really like the determination and the informative intention of your channel.
I'm really glad to see that there are such channels and people like you willing to share quality information in such a simple way.
You're doing a good job, keep going! :)
 
Zvetlana said:
I really like the determination and the informative intention of your channel.
I'm really glad to see that there are such channels and people like you willing to share quality information in such a simple way.
You're doing a good job, keep going! :)
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Thanks for your feedback!
It motivates me to make better and more content!
 
video, thumbnail, and sound looks good,
for me, it will be more perfect if you also add music background
 
Dud
VladislavRay said:
Thx for the feedback. Hmm..for now, I am just trying to provide value and see if this is for me or not.
These are the first videos and I get really nervous when I have a camera on me :D. Any tips to solve that :)?





Thanks a lot for this long feedback. I appreciate it and it really helps me.

"Did you made that yourself or bought from somewhere?"
I know a guy from Chile, we worked together on this 4 years ago. Now he is a Fivver Seller, really great guy and illustrator.


"I noticed that you have books in the cover. Did you insert those there to branding point of view! (Good)"
These are the last books I've read in the last 10 - 16 months. Each year I have the same personal goal: Read 12 books/year. (that's just one book per month) It's easy and at the end of the year It adds up.


"and your teeth is very white. did you go to some clinic or some toothpaste? (good) "
Thank you, I get that a lot. My teeth are natural, I believe these are the reason why they are so white:
- I quit all the soda juice (Pepsi, Cola, Sprite etc) 6 years ago
- I don't smoke
- I don't drink coffee
- I try to use low fluoride toothpaste ( less than 800 ppm), I am young so I don't need 1440 fluoride. Check on the back, most of the toothpaste destroys your enamel.
Unfortunately, once you produce damage to your teeth, they will never be the same :(
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Dude, you do not need ANY fluoride!!! Fluoride is yet another HUMUNGOUS lie sold to the world!! It calcifies your Pineal gland...do some research - you`re welcome!
 
ozzie5 said:
Dud


Dude, you do not need ANY fluoride!!! Fluoride is yet another HUMUNGOUS lie sold to the world!! It calcifies your Pineal gland...do some research - you`re welcome!
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Interesting! I will do some research.

So what do u use then? Any recommendation?


hideath said:
looks nice for real :)
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Thanks a lot for the feedback!



ferizamia said:
video, thumbnail, and sound looks good,
for me, it will be more perfect if you also add music background
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But I am using background music :( Maybe I should raise the volume a bit ?
 
That's actually a pretty good video. I personally found your pace to be a little slower than I like. Other than that, everything else is on-point. Good luck :)
 
Thanks, I will look into video scribe, 4 hour for a 10 minute video sounds reasonable.
 
FlipDime said:
That's actually a pretty good video. I personally found your pace to be a little slower than I like. Other than that, everything else is on-point. Good luck :)
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Thanks a lot for your time and your feedback! I like it faster too, I think it's because I am not native, I need some diction practice .


PrivateSMM said:
Good Content. Thumbnail contrast is low, try to increase it.
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Thank you for reviewing my content. I will try to increase it.


Panther28 said:
Thanks, I will look into video scribe, 4 hour for a 10 minute video sounds reasonable.
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Yes, it depends on how quickly you adjust to UI and the power of your computer. Yesterday I did 5 minutes video in 1:40 hours.
One pro tip: Create 4 or 5 videos before your trial expires. The free trial version lets you to create the videos and once you pay you can render them without that watermark.
 
The background is kinda messy and a bit distracting. Got any plain wall in your house? Nothing wrong with having some books or paintings in the background but here it just looks a bit like you didn't bother to clean up / find a good place :D

Keep it up!
 
the quality is really good.

What you can do is: present tools or niche tools which peoples search like Ahrefs, Semrush, Shopify etc. and promote discounts. You can check also cooperations with other youtube guys, that they link your account in the bio and you link there channels too.
 
Quite good for a starter.
I think having a clean background and a more engaging voice.

Good work, keep it up.
 
You asked: "So what do u use then? Any recommendation?" I have no idea what is available where you live...I use an import from Italy, called ESI Aloe Fresh. It`s a bit more expensive than the mass produced crap. Hope that helps! [By the way, you will get a lot of argument from dentists, who STILL insist that fluoride is "safe" - they cite that the tiny bit one injests or absorbs cannot harm us. They FAIL to mention that is cumulative...as are most of the crap put into commercial brand "foods".

Hope that helps!
 
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