How NOT to do it

So you have read everything on capturing emails, building that list and finally making money off it.

Then you go and do this:

{Hi|Hello|Hey} Thewealthyslacker,

I {appreciate|value|treasure|respect|admire} you.

That's why I {want to|wish to} {show|reveal} you how
{average|typical} every-day {people|individuals} are {generating|producing|creating}
REAL {commissions|payments|fees|incomes|moneys} with this:

== > Here's How It {Works|Runs|Gets results|Does the work|Get the work done} (Explained Inside).

{Best|Best regards|Best wishes|Warmest wishes|Regards|Sincerely|Sincerely yours},
Kevin

PS - If I {told|informed} you {for every|for each|for every single} $50 you.
put in - you 'd get $650 out ...

... {how much|just how much|what does it cost?} would you invest?

{Good|Great|Excellent}. {Because|Since|Due to the fact that} you will see these.
{strategies|techniques|methods} ... not like Most other.
you {have|have actually} ever seen.

See how this {guy|man|person} {manages|handles} 1,000%+.
ROI daily {to get|to obtain} $30k and $28k.
every 2 weeks.



Guys please proof read and test before you blast that email!!!!!!

wow, that's ridiculous.

Atleast people who read it 100% are ready to sign up. Think positive .