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DarkDrake said:

Thank you so that means it needs to be longer and with reference links preferably

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VSYNC said:

More that the writing style and substance of the information being provided are both very mediocre. You don't get very much value from reading it, and it's not very engaging when you read it.

Links help to provide more value and information, but just slamming a bunch of links in there and making it 4 times longer would just make it a 3,000-word article with lots of links that still reads like shit and give the reader Alzheimer's trying to get all the way through it.

If it was more conversational for a start it would help.

Also just to be really picky, there are examples of slight incongruities with native English that don't effect the actually information itself, but draw away from the quality of the piece. A good example of this is "But again, not every blogger succeeds in making a full time income from blogging. While some of the bloggers give up within a few months, others.."

This should be "But again, not every blogger succeeds in making blogging their full-time income source. While some bloggers give up within a few months, others..."

It's being pedantic, and these edits don't change the information being delivered, but if the audience is going to be native then this makes a difference. It makes the piece more cognitively easy to digest. It sounds right. It's the same for all languages no doubt.

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DarkDrake said:

I see. so it has to be "fun" to read and something that don't feel like homework. and grammar is a key factor as well.

That actually helps a lot since i always thought it was just about having a high word count with keywords worked in (obviously readable) but it makes a lot more sense to have it engage worthy and make the user think etc.

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