How much will you pay for this article? Is this wrote by native person?

It's poorly written right from the FIRST sentence.

For $36, you were literally robbed.

It's not worth more than $1 for 100 words at best.

I hope to fuck that is the price of the toy, not of the article :D
 
You should improve your skills try even more until you reach the goal
 
Both articles are terrible. There's no way these were written by a native English speaker. Ask for your money back, no need to ask for revisions, those won't be any better.

If you target native English speakers and these are meant to be for your money site, they are worthless. Even worse.

You can get much better articles on the Marketplace for around $10/500 words.
 
About the price in the first post, it is the price for that toy. It's still in the body of article.

Hey, thanks for your response. Actually the first article is my writing, haha. And the second one I ordered. I make the title like that so I can get honest response. If I write the title with "How is my writing?" then I wouldn't get honest review. I think for this time, I will order from bhw forum first. I already order 1 article. And for my money-site, I already posted too many articles from the non-native writer, let the site run for a test-site. Also I want to test how pbn can give SEO boost for my website with that kind of articles. It's too late to change now. For next website, I will 100% order from this forum. Hope I get decent-articles.
 
About the price in the first post, it is the price for that toy. It's still in the body of article.

Hey, thanks for your response. Actually the first article is my writing, haha. And the second one I ordered. I make the title like that so I can get honest response. If I write the title with "How is my writing?" then I wouldn't get honest review. I think for this time, I will order from bhw forum first. I already order 1 article. And for my money-site, I already posted too many articles from the non-native writer, let the site run for a test-site. Also I want to test how pbn can give SEO boost for my website with that kind of articles. It's too late to change now. For next website, I will 100% order from this forum. Hope I get decent-articles.

Lol.

P.S. You realise you could have just asked instead of misleading everyone? That would have probably given you better feedback, now people are more likely to avoid helping you. Good luck anyway.
 
Lol.

P.S. You realise you could have just asked instead of misleading everyone? That would have probably given you better feedback, now people are more likely to avoid helping you. Good luck anyway.

I need sharp review. Sorry, I will not do that again next time. About the price I post, i'm not misleading everyone. The price is in the body of the article, It's the price of the toy in Amazon. I already get the conclusion from everyone response in my thread, I will find the writer from this forum, find the native one and not only see the review, but also the price per 100 words, I really appreciate it. And sorry for misleading, it's my mistake.

P.S. The second article I ordered it. Not write myself. Price: $2,2 for 500 words.
 
where did you buy the 2nd article?

I bought from the professional writer in my country haha. But I think that non-native writers can't write as good as native-writers.
 
Ahh $2/500 articles..

You have to spend 5-7/500 words minimum to get an entry level Writer.

You can find good writers here but it will be a bumpy ride...

Good luck op.
 
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