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[HELP] Review My WP Theme [FREE] Clean-Fast Loading-Responsive-HTML5

Discussion in 'Web Design' started by dewaz, Jan 4, 2015.

  1. dewaz

    dewaz Regular Member

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    Hello BHW WP Builder,
    Recently I try to build WP Theme. After hours of coding and read read read bunch of tutorial site, here it is my theme.
    I've been design the most popular visualization with 2 columns and widget on the right, fast loading and clean (colors, fonts, etc).

    You can see the demo at here
    Or download the theme at here

    This theme has been test using mozilla, chrome, baidu and ie10.

    Please help me to review this theme and i please tell me your opinion. Is it good enough to sell this theme?
    Or it's need more improvement?

    Thank you BHW.
     
  2. yourdady

    yourdady Regular Member

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    does't look professional at all I'll say edit it a bit make it looks good.
     
  3. Asif WILSON Khan

    Asif WILSON Khan Executive VIP Jr. VIP

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    It doesn't look ready to sell to me.
    I think you need to keep practicing, good luck.
     
  4. dewaz

    dewaz Regular Member

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    thank you yourdady, what kind of edit i need to put in. or do you have any sites for me to check about it?
     
  5. dewaz

    dewaz Regular Member

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    any clue to makes quality up?
     
  6. jazzc

    jazzc Moderator Staff Member Moderator Jr. VIP

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    First of all, congrats for trying. That's more than most.

    If you want to see what characteristics themes that sell have, go to themeforest, take a look and get inspired.
     
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    jimmyisso Newbie

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    This is a good start. There is nothing wrong with the layout/framework, however, you need to work on styling if you plan on actually selling this theme. Most people that are purchasing themes are not great at customizing CSS and probably not great at enhancing logos and graphics with photoshop either. They are paying for a completed theme.

    Also, no one would pay for a theme that is not responsive and mobile-friendly. Your next learning project should be about CSS3 and Media Queries. Optimize your theme for a few screen resolutions and make your layout liquid once you shrink it below 960 pixels or so. 960 pixels is usually my cut off for a static desktop design and then I begin coding my css media queries into percentages instead of hard pixels, eliminating unnecessary items and ensuring that important items are easily noticeable. Good luck, and good start.
     
  8. GreenCloudVPS

    GreenCloudVPS Jr. VIP Jr. VIP

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    Yeah as others said you should make your theme responsive, and put some special features/blog/gallery layouts to your sites. It's lack of layouts now.
     
  9. joeiik

    joeiik Junior Member

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    download and read The Principles of Beautiful Web Design, 2nd Edition

    here: http://it-ebooks.info/book/2626/
     
  10. lilmasta

    lilmasta Elite Member

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    its not the bestest theme i have seen but its not the worst either , i see too many newspaper style theme try making a product review theme for amazon or clickbank
     
  11. keywordspot

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    Appreciate your try. But, need to develop little bit more ..

    Please concentrate with CSS with design. :) And then, refer other themes also.. You'll get some ideas to develop. :)