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[Help] Please Review My Work At Home Site

Discussion in 'Making Money' started by Jane91, Feb 4, 2012.

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  1. Jane91

    Jane91 BANNED BANNED

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    Hi!

    My site is
    I am going to provide memberships to work at home job seekers specially "Survey Filling" and "Writing Jobs" and "Other Stuff"

    Just need more info and help from the experts

    Thanks.
     
  2. starcity83

    starcity83 Regular Member

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    Great job, you can have 10 more keywords. You have about ten now, but you can add more. I will also send you a pm now.
     
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  3. Jane91

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    Ya I found 10 more keywords, and added a new page too
     
  4. StreamlineWeb

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    I would spend more time beautifying the page. Look at your top competitors, compare their Alexa ranks to see who is busier, and steal their ideas.

    For example:

    - I would increase the left and right margins to add more "white space" between the paragraphs and your page edge.

    - Go to Fiverr and spend the $5 to get that "Top 10 Most Popular..." graphic done professionally. It looks like crap and screams "scamateur".

    - Experiment with different fonts, your default font is very boring.

    - Test test and test some more!

    Good luck!
     
  5. Jane91

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    Ah I have a one more question bro, now then my best keyword is at page 5th of google for the 3rd position, should i add a blog to the site and write articles including this keyword if i wanna get this rank more up and up?
     
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    I would have to agree that the page needs a bit of fine tuning in the design department. If you PM me, I could gladly help you sharpen it up a bit for a very good cost.

    Also, there's a lot of advertisements on it at the moment. Too many are distracting to your customers and don't allow them to view you as a legitimate site.
     
  7. Jane91

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    How is now http://www.workathomenearnmoneyonline.info/
     
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    I have made 14500 backlinks so far...