[HELP] Need someone to analyze a website on page factors

I have been to an interview for SEO profile and have been asked to suggest on page changes.

I would be glad if someone could do it for me. I have done it myself but still wanna get additional points.

If anyone is wiling to help, then let me know and i will PM the website link. btw it is an e-commerce website.

Thanks!!

Let's try. Send it to me.