Help me improve my video please

RedditJostik

RedditJostik

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Hello everyone. People who understand tik tok, please watch my video and tell me how it can be improved. I'm still new to content creation.

https://www.tiktok.com/video/7580769425276636446

Here are the video statistics:


930 views ( 74 likes, 1 repost, 9 added to favorites )
On everage, viewers watched 28% of your video
50% of viewers reach 3 seconds, as I understand
 
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Based on the stats, the content is already showing good signs, but 28% retention shows that the intro is not strong enough to pull viewers in further. Try optimizing the first 2-3 seconds with a clearer hook, faster cut-off, and easy-to-read text, and you will see a steady increase in views + followers. With 50% retention up to 3 seconds in the new stage, it is not bad, just improve the intro a little and the algorithm will push it harder.
 
Try making your clips shorter and more engaging using trending sounds and clear captions consistent posting will help improve reach and engagement over time
 
Make your video shorter use trending sounds and clear captions, and post consistently to boost engagement
 
Hook viewers in the first few seconds, make it snappy and add captions. Make your call to action clear so people engage.
 
keep your videos concise incorporate popular audio, add readable captions, and maintain a regular posting schedule to increase engagement
 
Make your clips shorter and more captivating with trending sounds and clear captions, and post consistently to boost reach and interaction over time
 
This is the first video of you on tiktok account? It is not bad for the new account.
 
The blurry video at the beginning has nothing to do with the content. Let's fix these two points first: zai'shu. ...
 
Then, for the 28% watch time, you've got to keep the pace up. No slow parts. Deliver your message or entertainment quickly and concisely. Think about what value you're giving the viewer and make sure it's clear and constant.
 
Your hook isn’t strong enough, and the clips lack sharpness and focus. Add more drama to make the video more engaging.
 
Your content is good; just increase "engagement" in the first 3-5 seconds and the views will jump right in.
 
  1. Hook viewers immediately by creating suspense or posing an intriguing question right at the start of your video.
  2. Your content should also aim to evoke emotions like resonance, curiosity, or amusement in the audience.
  3. Use features like polls, direct questions, and challenges to boost interaction and make viewers feel involved.
  4. Incorporate relevant keyword hashtags to increase the probability of being recommended by the algorithm.
  5. Stay patient and maintain a long-term perspective.
Wishing you the best with your creative journey.
 
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