help me improve my fiverr gig

This is the gig:
http:/ fiverr dot com /rage4488/provide-you-with-loads-of-local-leads-for-your-offline-business

(just fix the variable above, the http and dotcom)

Basically i have a tool and this tool will find just about every business in your city and info on that business like:
name
email (if applicable)
phone number
if they are bing local
if they are on google places
if they are google places verified
if they have a domain
if yellow book hosts the site

This is really help if you are looking for business for your local business.

I really suck at copy writing so maybe some of you can give me pointers..

damn dont know how to post links, one sec

http:/ fiverr dot com /rage4488/provide-you-with-loads-of-local-leads-for-your-offline-business

Upload more pictures, get a video done and uploaded that. Get more likes to your gig. Get 5-10 people to purchase your gig... maintain a 100% rating. These are just a few simple steps to getting your gig more popular.

Tip: When creating the video, make sure to mention FIVERR and say "This is an exclusive fiverr gig" the mods love it!!

thanks!

Are you trying to self promote?