Help! is this a good landing page?

kefken

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Hi all,

As the tittle say is this a good landing page?
h**p://i-unlock.binhoster.com/
change ** to tt

(Later is maybe use a .com domain name)

If its good how do i get started?

Thanks!
 
Looks good, though I would suggest you to use smaller image and center everything. I have two screen 1920x1080 and 1024x768. Had a look on second screen and the buy now button was half of the screen couldn't clearly see. When making webpages make the they are centered (or left aligned) and about the width of 950-975px.

Also your second iphone was getting in the way of the slider messing up slightly. Might wanna fix that.
 
well it would be nice if it worked :) can't seeme to get the site opened. maybe its just me tho.
 
It isn't. The reason is at the first instant when a visitor sees your lander he can't see any clear call-to-action unless he scrolls down. I think there are too many distractions.
 
Yes Good. But put the "Instant Access Button" (Click Here ) Just on top of the Iphone.
That will help you better to convert according to me..
 
Its Not that Good, the text is a lil messed up. ( i mean chnage the font to something more visible to and easy to read) + get instant access wrttin in white ? would be good if you make it some other dark color.

+ slider takes alot of time to load.

and only features are written at the left side, would be good if you can write some review's by people or something else also

to cover the blank space.
 
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Looks nice... I would suggest, as previously said, work with smaller images and lower resolution!
 
Thanks for the tips!
already made some changes...
 
i like it.. can you really unlock iphones? is it software you gotta download? pm me please :]
 
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