Feedback on App Download Page For CPALead

I just completed this page today for a CPALead offer:

http://sweetcandies2.instapage.com/

Any feedback is greatly appreciated, I am very new to promoting app offers of any kind as i'm not sure how the download process actually works.
This offer is for IPhone only and since I own a Samsung Galaxy, I can't download this app to see if it converts. If anyone can download it on their IPhone to see if it converts, I will reimburse you on Paypal for any download costs, although I think this is a free offer. If you would like to help, please post below your results when downloading this (what steps you had to go through) so I know what my traffic will need to do.
I will be trying Facebook and Bing Ads for this offer once I know it converts. Feel free to follow my progress, I will update it regularly on this thread.
Lastly does it matter that it is .instapage or do I need to create a domain like www.downloadsweetcandies2.com for it to work on Facebook? I know Bing ads doesn't mind any URL.
Thanks guys, taking action long dick style!

Yikes I just viewed my page on my phone and it seems to not be mobile optimized. Need to tweak this more before testing.

is it for a specific country?Because when i try to download(from a iphone) it is eedirecting me to an offer page.

udit499 said:

is it for a specific country?Because when i try to download(from a iphone) it is eedirecting me to an offer page.

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Yes offer is for US. How does the capture page look on your iPhone? It should be straight forward up and down scrolling now that I tweaked it. If you can let me know if any of the wording or picture is getting bumped off of your screen, that would be awesome, thank you!

I just checked it for you OP and it works fine on my iphone. I would recommend centering the page

The small hand icon doesnt relate much to the text associated. Otherwise it's decebt looking.

Thanks for your feedbacks! I just found out Instapages charges a hefty subscription if I want more then 100 visitors to that page per month. I just took 3 hours to completely copy everything from Instapages to Wix. Now if you guys can check the Wix for me I would highly appreciate it <3. They have mobile friendly template also, hope it works.
http://funapps.wix.com/sweetcandies2

You are offering your visitators a mobile game with a free domain name, you made more than 10 bucks with this?

Omniscience216 said:

Thanks for your feedbacks! I just found out Instapages charges a hefty subscription if I want more then 100 visitors to that page per month. I just took 3 hours to completely copy everything from Instapages to Wix. Now if you guys can check the Wix for me I would highly appreciate it <3. They have mobile friendly template also, hope it works.
http://funapps.wix.com/sweetcandies2

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Same thing, change the hand icon, it's weird lol.

Otherwise, get a domain at godaddy for $1 and host that somewhere free, the wix address is not cool.

I can lend you free hosting from my dedicated if you cant afford it.

hulksta said:

You are offering your visitators a mobile game with a free domain name, you made more than 10 bucks with this?

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I still need some help testing the website layout, not worried about income yet. I'm most likely going to upgrade the domain name to remove the Wix advertisements once everything is fully functional.

TayaX said:

Same thing, change the hand icon, it's weird lol.

Otherwise, get a domain at godaddy for $1 and host that somewhere free, the wix address is not cool.

I can lend you free hosting from my dedicated if you cant afford it.

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Lol the hands are kind of weird . What would you suggest I put in place of them? Arrow Icons? Need something there or it will look too plain. Also thanks for your hosting offer I will send you a pm tomorrow, I'm too tired to keep working on this today, no sleep yet and it's morning!

Omniscience216 said:

Lol the hands are kind of weird . What would you suggest I put in place of them? Arrow Icons? Need something there or it will look too plain. Also thanks for your hosting offer I will send you a pm tomorrow, I'm too tired to keep working on this today, no sleep yet and it's morning!

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Whatever you want but icons related to the title of the description.

TayaX said:

Whatever you want but icons related to the title of the description.

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Yeah good advice mate!
BTW you can also put call to action button after the description of each iphone pic. Because its a long page, some people might not scroll down to the bottom. I may be wrong though but I would do it. Wait for others to reply.

As for the domain/website you really should buy a legit domain with hosting.

It may cost a little but if you take the right hosting you can use it for all your projects.
As for the domain it just should be a nice .com domain imo.

How do you want to promote this offer? If it is a landing page for let's say a global ad or anything you can always use redirection to send visitors to other offers if they are not from the US or when they are not on their iPhone.

I think the "Agent Alice" is a nice back-up plan if they are from some other countries.

Good luck mate.