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Does this readable content? Need Help From Native English Speakers

Discussion in 'Making Money' started by loveghost003, Jul 2, 2014.

  1. loveghost003

    loveghost003 Regular Member

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    Hi guys, I got a rewritten article from a freelancer. I should pay $5 for this article. The problem is I'm not native English speaker and I feel the content is not readable or has something wrong but I can't recognize the actual problem. So please I need any native English speaker to read this piece of content and rate the content from 1/5 to 5/5, and should I pay $5 for such content?:

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  2. 1337python

    1337python Regular Member

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    0/5 Shitty spun content you have there man, with a lot of grammar errors.
     
  3. Techxan

    Techxan Elite Member

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    0/5 as well .
     
  4. mqsss

    mqsss Regular Member

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    Tier 3 level content, $0.5 per 600 words is a reasonable price.
     
  5. bihguy

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    -5/5, that really sucks.
     
  6. Smirad

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    Definitely -5/5. I wouldn't pay a cent for this article.
     
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    k0d3r Newbie

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    Awful article!
    Someone with basics English knowledge would spot at least a few dozens of grammar errors.
     
  8. Carepolice

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    Who is this provider of yours? I'll take 10!
     
  9. acidol2

    acidol2 Supreme Member

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    Please for the love of.... NO!.
    I couldn't stand reading it lol.

    0/5...it's horrible.
     
  10. TheUnborn

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    Very bad buddy 0/5, don't pay him,there are some writers offering free high quality content here
     
  11. Nut-Nights

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    Please send me those writers profile urls.
     
  12. artificial_genius

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    Content looks pretty bad to me. Maybe worth $0.25
     
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    OP, do you even tone your body?!
     
  14. netmoney1

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    $5 for this!!!...I am signing my cat up on freelancer....
     
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    For some reason I can't open it or enlarge it so can't read it?
     
  18. driulis

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    If you are willing to spend 5$ for content, just go to fiverr or marketplace, you'll get a much higher quality content there. As for this, as everyone stated already it's 0/5 at best ;)
     
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    hey OP, who wrote this shit for you, rather than billing the freelancer $5 bill him $500 for wasting your time, I just read the first few lines, rewritten article even from a generator would be better than what you got from the freelancer. no sense of how to use punctuations and words, nonsense write up just throw away this shit and post in the Hire a Freelancer section and you would get a good freelancer here from BHW, also do note that if the freelancer who has written this shit for you and is demanding $5 is from BHW then report the same to the admin and Mods, but I think you might have got this freelancer from fiverr...