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Does my sales copy suck?

Discussion in 'Copywriting & Sales Persuasion' started by JimneyCricketIsDead, Oct 23, 2016.

  1. JimneyCricketIsDead

    JimneyCricketIsDead Newbie

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    I feel that you may circle the "y" for this question. I did not want to present my website on the post, as I was unsure if it would be a violation of the BHW rules. Perhaps if anyone wanted to be entertained, I could message you, and you could tell me how awful it is? :)
     
  2. Avada Kedavra

    Avada Kedavra Newbie

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    I can help you out with that, but from the way you've presented the case, you have already created the expectation for a crappy copy.. You can post your website here just don't post the link, do it in the following format: yourdomain dot com

    Avada Kedavra



     
  3. JimneyCricketIsDead

    JimneyCricketIsDead Newbie

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    I didn't want to under deliver. :)
     
  4. void957

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    Post your sales copy here. I will personally review it for you.
     
  5. nanetto

    nanetto Registered Member

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    I can take a look too but, guy, trust me that Avada Kedavra is right..
     
  6. articlewritingwork

    articlewritingwork Jr. VIP Jr. VIP

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    I will give it a check. Send me a PM
     
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    Gofobu Jr. VIP Jr. VIP

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    Why do you think your copy sucks in the first place? Let's start with that maybe...
     
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    I'd also like to help. If you don't want to post here you can send me a PM as well :)
     
  9. Reaver

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    OP was last seen November 2016.

    You're not going to get a response from him.

    Move on.