Critique on Youtube Video

Hey everybody, I'm new here so what's up?!!!!! Yeah so anyway, I just want critique on my YouTube video I made about the Starting Five opportunity. Just sit through it and get back to me about what I could improve because I know it's a fantastic opportunity but maybe I didn't deliver properly. You have to type in "Starting Five Webinar" on Youtube and watch the first two videos. I'm not trying to get you guys to sign up, that's completely up to you if you want to do so but I just want opinions because it makes no sense how no one's viewing such an informative video. It's a 2-part so get comfortable! Thank you so much people of BlackHat!