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Critique My Squeeze Page Version 1 or 2 or what?

Discussion in 'Making Money' started by GlobalP, Jun 21, 2012.

  1. GlobalP

    GlobalP Regular Member

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    Alright guys, about to start doing some solo ads and want to see if I can get some suggestions on the good ole squeeze page.

    I have 2 versions, the most recent here:
    Code:
    http://www.karsononline.com/get-wp-optins/
    The first original version that I got the 2nd out of which needed some work here:
    Code:
    http://www.karsononline.com/sa/get-wp-optins/
    I am thinking of split testing but I am looking for any suggestions you wanna add. New headline options, if you think it's too busy, or if 2 optin forms is too much....

    Let me know your thoughts! Constructive criticism or whatever!

    Oh and if you want the plugin don't sign up/optin I'll just give it to you.

    Thanks!
     
  2. mallett

    mallett Newbie

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    I like the second one a lot more. Cleaner, but I would move the opt in email higher so people do not need to scroll.

    Do you have a copy of the plug in
     
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  3. bobbylove321

    bobbylove321 BANNED BANNED

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    The most recent one (/get-wp-optins/) is easier to understand than the one with the large logo.

    However, nothing is final, unless you split-test.
     
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  4. skadster

    skadster Junior Member

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    Option two definitely. The first one is just a bit busy.
     
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  5. Hartwigm

    Hartwigm Junior Member

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    Option two for sure, although I don't think either would convince me. It honestly feels a bit too cluttered for me, but I'm definitely not an expert. Good luck!
     
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    Going to go with option two as far as aesthetics go, although it could use an opt in email field in the center, like the first one has.
     
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  7. GlobalP

    GlobalP Regular Member

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    Thanks guys!
    so far I have a bit busy. Probably wouldn't be convincing enough... and move the optin higher so you don't have to scroll. I'm thinking I need a video. I'll make another and let you guys see. Indeed, as suggested I'll probably split test these two as well.

    As for the plugin the DL link is karsononline.com/WpOptinInstructions.zip for instructions and
    karsononline.com/wpoptinsFromKarsononline.1.3.zip for the plugin itself.

    Too big for a virus total but it's clean.