Critique My Squeeze Page Version 1 or 2 or what?

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Alright guys, about to start doing some solo ads and want to see if I can get some suggestions on the good ole squeeze page.

I have 2 versions, the most recent here:
Code:
http://www.karsononline.com/get-wp-optins/

The first original version that I got the 2nd out of which needed some work here:
Code:
http://www.karsononline.com/sa/get-wp-optins/

I am thinking of split testing but I am looking for any suggestions you wanna add. New headline options, if you think it's too busy, or if 2 optin forms is too much....

Let me know your thoughts! Constructive criticism or whatever!

Oh and if you want the plugin don't sign up/optin I'll just give it to you.

Thanks!
 
I like the second one a lot more. Cleaner, but I would move the opt in email higher so people do not need to scroll.

Do you have a copy of the plug in
 
The most recent one (/get-wp-optins/) is easier to understand than the one with the large logo.

However, nothing is final, unless you split-test.
 
Option two for sure, although I don't think either would convince me. It honestly feels a bit too cluttered for me, but I'm definitely not an expert. Good luck!
 
Going to go with option two as far as aesthetics go, although it could use an opt in email field in the center, like the first one has.
 
Thanks guys!
so far I have a bit busy. Probably wouldn't be convincing enough... and move the optin higher so you don't have to scroll. I'm thinking I need a video. I'll make another and let you guys see. Indeed, as suggested I'll probably split test these two as well.

As for the plugin the DL link is karsononline.com/WpOptinInstructions.zip for instructions and
karsononline.com/wpoptinsFromKarsononline.1.3.zip for the plugin itself.

Too big for a virus total but it's clean.
 
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