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purem5

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I know I have already posted in this section but my blog is now 10 days old. I always love to hear the feedback because that helps me fix my mistakes.
You can find my website at:

www.fifthavenuenews.com


This thread has been extremely helpful with people commenting on what needs to be done/changed
Feel free to tell me on this thread anything I could add or remove to make the website better!
 
Looks good in my opinion, however, the articles got to be longer because some of the topics should be covered on a few thousand words rather than 300 words or whatever you seem to write, for example the Snapchat article. Give examples how to grow your snapchat, monetization methods, etc. :)

Good luck!
 
Why not update your old thread? Anyway...


  1. You'll be able to post links after you reach 50 posts.
  2. Circumventing the forum filter is against the rules.
 
IMHO I think it looks pretty good. I like that you have a lot of recent news on there, it makes it look totally legit.
 
Looks good, its just odd how the FB like box has only 8 likes...
well considering the Facebook Page is only 8 days old, and I have little marketing resources for my website its actually quite normal hah.
 
Looks good man, a few small things

On my phone the titles on the homepages such as "life" are slightly too far left, they don't align with the images below

Font on articles is a little small for my liking, check out how the big boys like guardian and telegraph do it

Logo looks a lot better than others I've seen but something isn't quite right, is it pixelated in some way? Maybe the font needs to be more bold? Not sure..

Very good though :-)
 
Looks good man, a few small things

On my phone the titles on the homepages such as "life" are slightly too far left, they don't align with the images below

Font on articles is a little small for my liking, check out how the big boys like guardian and telegraph do it

Logo looks a lot better than others I've seen but something isn't quite right, is it pixelated in some way? Maybe the font needs to be more bold? Not sure..

Very good though :-)

Thank you! I will keep working
 
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