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Check out this 2 website i just created for my customers

Discussion in 'My Journey Discussions' started by cm88529, Feb 8, 2014.

  1. cm88529

    cm88529 Registered Member

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    It has been a busy week for me

    Check out the two new site i managed

    NOTE: i used wordpress theme...

    nsu-d dot com

    prosamgeeks dot com

    THANKS GOD
     
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  2. tonib

    tonib Power Member

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    First, this is in the wrong section.
    Second, they look like crap.
    nsu-d - On the main page some of the text is unreadable in some images. The "about" page looks awful. The "read post" page has tables... What is this? 90s? The phones in "contact us" are not aligned.
    prosamgeeks - I don't even want to talk about this site. It looks terrible.

    If I was your client I'd fire you on the spot. I hope that this post is not going to offend you, but help you improve your skills.
     
  3. cm88529

    cm88529 Registered Member

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    Thanks...i will improve... the owners like the work i did...
     
  4. laowai

    laowai Power Member

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    There is always a chance that the owners doesn't know anything how professional site should look like...
     
  5. srinu0812

    srinu0812 Supreme Member

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    You need to improve a lot!
     
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    kegnum Senior Member

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    Why are you sharing this. Those sites looks cheap. I'm not sure what you are trying to prove.
     
  7. cm88529

    cm88529 Registered Member

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    What am trying to say is i manage them for my customers.... though they've not complain yet..
     
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    Schvamp Power Member

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    Don't know why you ever would share your clients sites here at BHW.
    And I guess both theme's you're using are free ones? I know at least one is cus I'm using it myself.

    Also, why would you leave the wordpress meta widgets in the sidebar, and your widgets don't even fit..

    [​IMG]

    I could go on, but I wont.
     
  9. cm88529

    cm88529 Registered Member

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    I understand... i want to learn more...that is i shared it... yes i picked them from wordpress... the meta the owner
    wants people to login and make post to the website... there will be contributors to the site
     
  10. spook2992

    spook2992 Junior Member

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    what adsense size did you use for the ads on the left?
     
  11. rlloydevans

    rlloydevans Newbie

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    A lot of your buttons and images are fuzzy and pixellated. You probably are using straight gif or jpg formats. Should have them converted to vectors.
     
  12. TheUnborn

    TheUnborn Elite Member

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    Better your outsource you work on fiverr, will look more professional and will get you more clients.
     
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  13. Vidyam

    Vidyam Junior Member

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    cm88529 dont get discouraged, jut keep on playing & learning :]
    everyone has to start from somewhere :3
    I think they are not that bad, you just need to adjust wp a little more
    put Subscribe to Blog at top & also a few soc. shortcuts & remove meta if you dont need it
    also as advised adjust those adds to fit in page

    congratz on clients, I am happy for you ^^ :clap2:
     
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  14. deedee1whoa

    deedee1whoa Power Member

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    Error establishing a database connection for prosamgeeks.

    While for nsu-d, you need to edit lots of things. Good luck! ;)
     
  15. WickedLamborghini

    WickedLamborghini Registered Member

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    I've checked only your second website and it looks like you have to move your left column a little more to the right so it can shows the embed video.


    Oh, another thing: Invest in image, and use vectorized image... that way you won't have problems with image quality.


    Improve and accept critics, that way people can scale their knowledge and do great things.
     
  16. Tosmekop

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    The second site isn't even loading for me.
    It appears there's a database error.

    EDIT: The second time around, it loaded. That woman on the left.... :D

    One of the articles caught my eye. The one about Leonardo DiCaprio not being a drug user.
    The article seemed to be pretty well written, so I ran a quick copyscape check on it, and it was not a 100% pass.
    All in all, it's not bad, but there could certainly be some improvements made, such as image aligning, and replacing the word "musics" with "music", among other things.
    Not bad.
     
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  17. mickyfu

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    Designing a website and using a theme are two different things. I would not tell clients I was going to design a website, then use a WordPress theme.
     
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    Its a premade wordpress theme, you shouldn't be using those words.
     
  20. DopeBoi

    DopeBoi Newbie

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    i rate it a 4 out of 10