Can you make this sentence any more powerful?

hasan7707

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So I came across this quote on love. Seems extremely thought-out and powerful to me.

I will love you till time has lost all meaning.

Let me know if you can come up with something more powerful, or even alternative (and cool) way of saying the same thing. I have high expectations of seeing a more powerful version from sir @Sherb, sir @Blain Cooper and @Sudarshan Kar.

Thank you.

~ hasan7707

 

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SEOzack

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When times fades my love will prosper.

 

Nut-Nights

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I will stop loving you, the day death gets late to the party.

Does it even make a sense?

 

hasan7707

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zack101 said:

When times fades my love will prosper.

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Gives me the sense that up until time starts fading, my love will stay latent/mediocre. Great idea, though.

I think this will make a more proper version:

My love for you will forever-grow, no matter if time fades or death does us apart.

Nothing even close to the original sentence though, unfortunately.

 

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In the end what matters the most is when you thought you had everything

 

hasan7707

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Nut-Nights said:

I will stop loving you, the day death gets late to the party.

Does it even make a sense?

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I didn't get the point, sadly. Can you elaborate what you mean here?

 

Nut-Nights

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hasan7707 said:

I didn't get the point, sadly. Can you elaborate what you mean here?

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F**k my English, I mean death always come on time and never get late, so the day its late I will stop loving you, which is not possible. Does it make any sense now?

 

hasan7707

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Nut-Nights said:

F**k my English, I mean death always come on time and never get late, so the day its late I will stop loving you, which is not possible. Does it make any sense now?

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I thought it through that way, but, didn't really find the powerful impact in that. But that could be just me.

Thank you for taking the time to help me out, though.

 

DrDuran

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My love for you is timeless

 

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krisbritt

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My love for you is one of a kind, for no man can ever love the same love twice.

 

hasan7707

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krisbritt said:

My love for you is one of a kind, for no man can ever love the same love twice.

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Great one.

 

Danny Crypto

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You're smile, you're giggle gives me breathe and sense to live.
ILY

 

javabro

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baby don't hurt me

 

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krisbritt

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hasan7707 said:

Great one.

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Thank you, I'm thinking for another entry.
You gotta propose to someone this valentine <3
Let me do my best

 

seoz87

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I will love you till time has lost all meaning x ∞ = more powerful

 

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krisbritt

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My love for you will be true until the day that my heart finally decides to stop beating.

 

Word Wizard

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If the clock is tickin' I'll keep on lickin'

 

7ZEUS7

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This one is more realistic:-

I will love you till my Dick get sore

 

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krisbritt

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My love for you is immortal and this ain't all I need but it is all there is.

 

hasan7707

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seoz87 said:

I will love you till time has lost all meaning x ∞ = more powerful

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Why didn't I think of that...

krisbritt said:

My love for you will be true until the day that my heart finally decides to stop beating.

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Love this one too.

SimpleSiteSolutions said:

If the clock is tickin' I'll keep on lickin'

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Keep lickin' what?

7ZEUS7 said:

This one is more realistic:-

I will love you till my Dick get sore

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Okay, this moved from love to lust.

krisbritt said:

My love for you is immortal and this ain't all I need but it is all there is.

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Thanks a lot for thinking these up.