Can Someone Rate This Landing Page.

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  1. timchuks87

    timchuks87 Junior Member

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    Can you guys rate this Landing page on the scale of 1-10.

    http://freeforlifewireless.com

    It is a redirect for an Affiliate portal. Do not Fill in any of your detail just View and rate it relative to Lead Conversion


    Regards Tim
     
  2. kirkonpolttaja

    kirkonpolttaja Senior Member

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    OH F*CK MY BRAIN!!!

    That landing page is way too crammed :D i cant concentrate in one thing in that site, cut 50% of the stuff off and leave little space between texts.

    I would give 3/10 just because it is too crammed, but style is around 7.5/10

    EDIT: that video is good in that page, it works... but it should have short delay like countdown numbers on it so visitor wont get scared :D
     
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  3. islandman1010

    islandman1010 Elite Member

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    I have to agree. Way too much going on. Not quite sure what I am doing. Am i signing up to be a sub dealer...am I joe public thats going to get my calls for nothing. Am I going to make $150 daily. What am i requesting on the form? Info on how to get my calls for nothing or how to make money..and somethings going to cost me $200. Not really sure what though. Peoples attention span on a landing page is limited and must be sharp and to the point. It has to be clear whats going on and what they need to do. Tell me what I want...then tell me how to get it. There is far too much to read and digest. IMHO :)
     
  4. TheRealRazzy

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    There's WAY to much going on.

    My eyes didn't know what to read.

    Simplify it and it should look better.


    Just think of the saying "Less Is More" :)
     
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  5. milans

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    I just officially fried my brain looking at that page. Had a little epileptic seizure on the side.
     
  6. Orbit143

    Orbit143 Senior Member

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    What the F !!!
    Drop this and start over. This site can cause brain damage and seizure, you think thats good? :D
     
  7. mangobajito

    mangobajito Power Member

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    i will give 4/10
     
  8. SilverMovieDownloads

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    its look somewhat spammer but nice design though.

    8/10
     
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  10. ryanhackmachine

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    when i opened it i dont know what to read first and yellow is hurting my eyes sorry but i rate it as 1/10
     
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    shazhack Newbie

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  12. timchuks87

    timchuks87 Junior Member

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    Thanks everyone for your 'naked' reviews like i said, it's an affiliate portal, not my personal site.
     
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    thelonewolf Newbie

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    Way to much going on on that page. I would say get rid of the yellow backgrounds. Get rid of the flashing "New" arrows. Space everything out a little bit. I would give it a 3/10
     
  14. Velvet

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    too much yellow on it, site looks crowded, atcually after I saw the site I have no idea what is this about
     
  15. Rookie999

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    3/10 same... Way to busy
     
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