Can somebody look at my website?

Hey all,

I've been doing White Hat SEO for a client, and I can't even seem to get them ranked for a close EDM, of keywords that should be easily obtainable. I've been doing article submissions (manually) and only a few have been indexed. Can any of you experienced SEO people take a look at the source and tell me how I'm doing it wrong?

Thanks.

I can take a look, send a PM with url, how long ago you made changes, and what changes were made and i'll let you know my assessment.

Dare I say, mix in some black hat seo

it's because you're busy manually spinning and submitting 50 articles in one day while your competitors can submit 1000 articles in one day without problem.
seriously, why are so fanatic to whitehat, blackhat method or whatsoever?
do you think none of those huge authority sites are free from what you think as "blackhat"?