Can I get your honest opinion?

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woxinghu

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Apr 4, 2010

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• Sep 17, 2010

• #1

Hi hi, I wrote a little report as a giveaway for people to opt-in to my list. I'm looking to get some feedback on this. It's basically giving some very real tips to using a squeeze page to start your own online business.

I think this report is good enough to go but if there's any ways I can improve this, can I get your honest feedback?

It's attached to this post.

 

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Chief Ranker

Power Member

Dec 27, 2009

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• Sep 17, 2010

• #2

I didn't read the whole thing just skimmed through it but if it's not too much trouble for you, you should change the green font and text. It's awful.

 

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Daniel0cean

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Aug 18, 2010

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• Sep 17, 2010

• #3

i love it. great effort and work, but you really need to get rid of that green writing and that font. it really makes people not wanting to read all of it

 

thomansfel

Power Member

Dec 11, 2009

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• Sep 17, 2010

• #4

best feedback you can receive is by getting it out there, you can always add or modify anything and listen to the fellow BHW member, change the green font

 

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woxinghu

Newbie

Apr 4, 2010

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• Sep 18, 2010
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• #5

Okay, so - getting rid of green font - check. Looks like the rest is okay then

 

destination-target

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• Sep 18, 2010

• #6

you need more professional format.