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Can I get your honest opinion?

Discussion in 'Making Money' started by woxinghu, Sep 17, 2010.

  1. woxinghu

    woxinghu Newbie

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    Hi hi, I wrote a little report as a giveaway for people to opt-in to my list. I'm looking to get some feedback on this. It's basically giving some very real tips to using a squeeze page to start your own online business.

    I think this report is good enough to go but if there's any ways I can improve this, can I get your honest feedback?

    It's attached to this post.
     

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  2. likeskoolaid

    likeskoolaid Regular Member

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    I didn't read the whole thing just skimmed through it but if it's not too much trouble for you, you should change the green font and text. It's awful.
     
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  3. Daniel0cean

    Daniel0cean Regular Member

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    i love it. great effort and work, but you really need to get rid of that green writing and that font. it really makes people not wanting to read all of it
     
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  4. thomansfel

    thomansfel Jr. VIP Jr. VIP

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    best feedback you can receive is by getting it out there, you can always add or modify anything and listen to the fellow BHW member, change the green font
     
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  5. woxinghu

    woxinghu Newbie

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    Okay, so - getting rid of green font - check. Looks like the rest is okay then
     
  6. destination-target

    destination-target Regular Member

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    you need more professional format.;)