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BHW members.... I need feedback

Discussion in 'Making Money' started by alexanderkr1, Sep 12, 2008.

  1. alexanderkr1

    alexanderkr1 Registered Member

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    Whats up everyone,

    I need some opinions on this new capture page I've built. I only need opinions on the design. Don't worry about opting in at the bottom. If you want/need any of the the freebies, just holler at me. I just need honest feedback.

    Here's the capture page

    hxxp://www.internetmarketingdepot.net


    thanks,

    kevin
     
  2. Black&Red

    Black&Red Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    Ok, so the header is ok but remove that background!
    Other than that good job! :)
     
  3. alexanderkr1

    alexanderkr1 Registered Member

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    Black,

    Do you suggest a different background, or just all white?


    kevin
     
  4. Black&Red

    Black&Red Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    all white ;)
    :pcguru:
     
  5. smokes4life

    smokes4life Regular Member

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    Alexander, looks quite good, but I reckon that you may want to put a longer sentence at the end instead of the "I hate Spam Too". Maybe add an additional line that "Your details will not be sold........." You get the drift. :)
     
  6. alexanderkr1

    alexanderkr1 Registered Member

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    fixed......... i think ur right......... it does look better
     
  7. unlimitedpostings

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    Not bad, but there are always improvements that could be made. It is kind of plain, and you could spice it up a little. I am not creative so don't ask me how. Don't get me wrong though, it is okay and should convert okay.
     
  8. alexanderkr1

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    Smokes, ur right............ fixed
     
  9. Prideoflion

    Prideoflion Registered Member Premium Member

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    It Looks Pretty Good, In My Opinion Dude.

    The Only Bit Of Advice I Would Give You Is, To Include The Title Of Your Product/Website In The Banner On Top Of Your Page.

    Leaving It Blank Takes Away From It.
     
  10. alexanderkr1

    alexanderkr1 Registered Member

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    I was kinda thinkin that too, plain. I'm not the most creative mfr in the world either.
     
  11. otherjohn

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    Personally, I think its pretty plain in design.
    I suggest trying to spice it up more. WF has tons of designer sites that you can get inspiration from. Better looks give more trust to the user to purchase your junk.
    Just my 2 cents.
     
  12. Prideoflion

    Prideoflion Registered Member Premium Member

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    Dude I Love What The Button For Your Opt-in Forum Says:

    Get My Package!

    lol
     
  13. alexanderkr1

    alexanderkr1 Registered Member

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    what is WF?
     
  14. justthinking

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    Looks good. I would place another opt-in somewhere though. Close to the top/middle of page.
     
  15. RandomStuff

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    Probably W*arriorF*orum. They only other WF I know of is W*ickedF*ire, but they're pretty much against ebook type of stuff. W*arriorF*orum is the ebook/squeeze page/etc type of crowd. If you go over there and check people's sigs/sites, you can get inspiration of what to do with yours, is what I think otherjohn was saying?
     
  16. catman08

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    Its good for the start. However try to decrease the umber of border that you have.
     
  17. xplicit

    xplicit BANNED BANNED

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    I honestly think it is to plain. Theres really nothing in the text or video that gives me any inspiration to sign up.

    Just my honest opinion.

    Maybe try to ad a testimonial, or tell them how long it will take to start making money, What it involves (a hint) Something in that nature.
     
  18. mikemclean

    mikemclean Newbie

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    I think it is actually a bit confusing....

    1. You talk a lot about the stuff that you are giving away free - but you never ELUDE to what the BRAND NEW SYSTEM does or is. Is it the free ebooks/marketing tools at the bottom? Is it some software that is an all-in-one, what does it do?

    2. HOW does you giving away the $500 in free stuff prove anything (
    And to PROVE how good this system works)??

    3. The free ebooks/marketing tools are free - but what about the BRAND NEW SYSTEM, you mention that when I give my email and name I will be given a download link - is that for the ebooks or the BRAND NEW SYSTEM?

    I hope that this is taken constructively and not any other way...

    Regards,

    Mike



    *********************************************************
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    For a very limited time, you can get these Internet Marketing Tools for FREE! Limited copies available, get yours TODAY!
     
  19. Black&Red

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  20. ewind

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    Header is pretty good