Best Way To Leverage Offline CPA??

Discussion in 'Offline Marketing' started by ycfme, Feb 4, 2011.

  1. ycfme

    ycfme Power Member

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    I posted flyers offline to see what kind of response I would get to a job posting I made for a "Virtual Assistant" to help with testing offers , checking surveys for flaws and referring others. To my surprise I got a number interested replies.However, I don't think my greeting email to their responses is strong enough.

    I need some stronger and more "professional" sounding copy to send back in my response to their inquires.

    Any ideas?
     
  2. eloquenceeee

    eloquenceeee Regular Member

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    Use SEO jargon they won't understand. That will help a bit.
     
  3. ycfme

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    LOL.... thanks to be honest, i'm just beginning to "understand" SEO jargon myself :p

    What I DONT want to do is perplex ppl with something very simple as fill and "test" out X amount of offers and get paid X amount.

    Thanks again

     
  4. nimbus49

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    Do not try to confuse people with any jargon they can't understand. You're trying to build a business....best to be honest and use terms they understand.

    Ask them if they are following you.....if they don't, explain it to them in plain english!