best script to convince

unityseo · Aug 5, 2021

hi, am doing chance to win an iPhone 12 sweepstake.

just wonder what best script to convince people to participate? and clicks my links.

my current method is: "hey, you won a new iPhone!, grab your copy at link in bio". but no more clicks anymore.

thank you,
regards.

Deleted member 658642 · Aug 5, 2021

unityseo said:
"hey, you won a new iPhone!, grab your copy at link in bio".

Your bio link would be public so your audience’s thought process would be :

1. The link is public. Someone else must’ve already claimed it.
2. The link is public and therefore, it must be some sort of scam.
3. Why am I so special that he’s asking me to click on a bio link that’s available to everyone else? Something’s not right.
4. How would they track that I’m the one chosen for the giveaway?

This isn’t 2010 where you can just plug in a link, ask people to click on it and they’d convert automatically.

For offers like this, you need to establish trust with the audience. Make them think that they’ve won a once in a lifetime opportunity. Put some creativity into it and the conversions should follow, assuming every other part of your campaign is perfect.

unityseo · Oct 23, 2021

RushingWind said:
Your bio link would be public so your audience’s thought process would be :

1. The link is public. Someone else must’ve already claimed it.
2. The link is public and therefore, it must be some sort of scam.
3. Why am I so special that he’s asking me to click on a bio link that’s available to everyone else? Something’s not right.
4. How would they track that I’m the one chosen for the giveaway?

This isn’t 2010 where you can just plug in a link, ask people to click on it and they’d convert automatically.

For offers like this, you need to establish trust with the audience. Make them think that they’ve won a once in a lifetime opportunity. Put some creativity into it and the conversions should follow, assuming every other part of your campaign is perfect.

For your information above script still working, i think if i do a tiny tweak it going to work better. so what you recommend? else building an audiences.

thank you

uncutu · Nov 14, 2021

read some books/blogs on copywriting and start split testing. or identify your competition who is killing it, and steal one.
nobody gonna give you a golden headline here

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